On Apples and Oranges

ON APPLES AND ORANGES


Apples hard and slick,
oranges puckered and soft.
Hard to suck apples.


For the Apples and Oranges contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 11:36 PM
oh, how cute.VEry interesting how you compared them. Congrats on HM. I really enjoyed this one.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Congrats John on your HM in Carol's contest..another beauty luv..enjoy...
Gorelick Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:52 PM
You made me smile.. congrats on your win. BG
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 4:23 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, John
Poet Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Congrats John on your win ....
Freeman Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 7:01 AM
John, Congratulations on your success in Carol's Contest. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest J T. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 5:56 PM
great point John.. and would not even try .. fantastic words ..good luck in the contest luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 12:27 PM
hahahah what an innocent humor with wit, John
Brown Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest John. Love, Carol
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