Notes About The Poem

On Any Given Day

i believed in you and your promises
and what have i to show for it
but a broken heart



AP: Honorable Mention 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mckeithan Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Good one Line. Short but says a lot. You believe someone and it is easy to be let down. Trust is tough
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 3:36 PM
Thank you very much, Oliver ~
Wolf Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 9:08 AM
A loss of belief in belief as well, I imagine. ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 4:37 PM
not always rosy ~
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