On An Evening Made For Two

On an evening made for two Far above the borders, north of anything I’ve seen Nervous apprehension, up to now was just a dream Falling as I see her more in love than yesterday Gazing on her smile, takes my every breath away A wished forever meeting, sunset shimmers lace the skies Standing now before her, staring deep her dark brown eyes Mesmerizing beauty twilight whispers float the air Enchanted by the vision that my heart has come to share When at last I kiss her, moonlight glows the skies above Stardust sparkles glisten, down on this amazing love Savoring these moments on an evening made for two Knowing that at long last all my dreams have now come true

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Date: 9/30/2017 1:38:00 PM
Great write, Chris, romantic and yearning I also wanted to comment on, "I Know You - collaboration with Chris Green"you both have created a lot of imagery and movement in this beautiful scene.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/18/2017 6:52:00 AM
Heavenly lines you have used here Chris, and I am so happy to see you writing again....Maria
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Date: 9/8/2017 11:14:00 AM
Sigh, lovely lilt to the reading. Good work.
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Date: 9/7/2017 10:43:00 AM
Loved every line !! It flows so beautifully Chris :)
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Date: 9/7/2017 8:11:00 AM
Just what you are known for best, Chris:) loved this:)
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Date: 9/5/2017 6:29:00 PM
Oh heavenly beautiful my dear friend Chris. Kinda been out of the loop for a while but this is just a beauty I need to add to my faves for another night read. Lol! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 3:00:00 PM
Chris, I was so happy to see that you posted a poem. It's very romantic and I hope all your dreams do come true. Beautiful piece. :)
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Date: 9/4/2017 5:22:00 PM
Oh.. What a beautiful love poem. I have read it several times. have a good evening my friend. Peace and Love
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Date: 9/2/2017 10:06:00 PM
There you go, back to the prince of love poetry we all love! Loved this one! Hope you are well!
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Date: 9/2/2017 2:41:00 PM
- Really beautifully written, Chris - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/1/2017 3:59:00 PM
ohh, how you fascinate me by weaving affectionate lines once again, chris... keep your chin up.. huggs
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Date: 9/1/2017 2:23:00 PM
Lovely, friend...
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Date: 9/1/2017 10:51:00 AM
Beautifully stated my friend...hope all is going well with you Chris...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/1/2017 10:42:00 AM
WoW! Chris, What a beautiful and romantic evening indeed. I enjoyed everything about this amazing write. I see that I have some catching up to do. Welcome back my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/1/2017 8:25:00 AM
This is beautiful, Chris and a lucky one you are!
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Date: 9/1/2017 12:22:00 AM
Beautiful poem my friend :)
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Date: 8/31/2017 9:04:00 PM
Lovely pen my friend xomo :)
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Date: 8/31/2017 7:51:00 PM
such a beautiful flow to your romantic poem Chris:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/31/2017 6:58:00 PM
So beautiful, my friend!
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Date: 8/31/2017 6:58:00 PM
When I read your love poems, I can drift into a world without problems, if only for a moment.
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