Chris Green Poet Rhyme

On An Evening Made For Two

On an evening made for two  

Far above the borders,
north of anything I’ve seen

Nervous apprehension,
up to now was just a dream

Falling as I see her
more in love than yesterday

Gazing on her smile,
takes my every breath away

A wished forever meeting,
sunset shimmers lace the skies

Standing now before her,
staring deep her dark brown eyes

Mesmerizing beauty
 twilight whispers float the air 

Enchanted by the vision
that my heart has come to share

When at last I kiss her,
moonlight glows the skies above

Stardust sparkles glisten,
down on this amazing love

Savoring these moments
on an evening made for two

Knowing that at long last
all my dreams have now come true

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Eve Roper September 30, 2017 at 1:38 PM Great write, Chris, romantic and yearning I also wanted to comment on, "I Know You - collaboration with Chris Green"you both have created a lot of imagery and movement in this beautiful scene.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Maria Williams September 18, 2017 at 6:52 AM Heavenly lines you have used here Chris, and I am so happy to see you writing again....Maria

Patricia Cresswell September 8, 2017 at 11:14 AM Sigh, lovely lilt to the reading. Good work.

Lenna Walker September 7, 2017 at 10:43 AM Loved every line !! It flows so beautifully Chris :)

Joanna Daniel September 7, 2017 at 8:11 AM Just what you are known for best, Chris:) loved this:)

Akkina Downing September 5, 2017 at 6:29 PM Oh heavenly beautiful my dear friend Chris. Kinda been out of the loop for a while but this is just a beauty I need to add to my faves for another night read. Lol! Hugs and smiles :)

Carol B. September 5, 2017 at 3:00 PM Chris, I was so happy to see that you posted a poem. It's very romantic and I hope all your dreams do come true. Beautiful piece. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu September 4, 2017 at 5:22 PM Oh.. What a beautiful love poem. I have read it several times. have a good evening my friend. Peace and Love

John Hamilton September 2, 2017 at 10:06 PM There you go, back to the prince of love poetry we all love! Loved this one! Hope you are well!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2017 at 2:41 PM - Really beautifully written, Chris - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 1, 2017 at 3:59 PM ohh, how you fascinate me by weaving affectionate lines once again, chris... keep your chin up.. huggs

Charlie Smith September 1, 2017 at 2:23 PM Lovely, friend...

Winged Warrior September 1, 2017 at 10:51 AM Beautifully stated my friend...hope all is going well with you Chris...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y. September 1, 2017 at 10:42 AM WoW! Chris, What a beautiful and romantic evening indeed. I enjoyed everything about this amazing write. I see that I have some catching up to do. Welcome back my friend:-) Alexis

Mike Gentile September 1, 2017 at 8:25 AM This is beautiful, Chris and a lucky one you are!

Darren White September 1, 2017 at 12:22 AM Beautiful poem my friend :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 31, 2017 at 9:04 PM Lovely pen my friend xomo :)

Jan Allison August 31, 2017 at 7:51 PM such a beautiful flow to your romantic poem Chris:-) hugs jan xx

Sunlite Wanter August 31, 2017 at 6:58 PM When I read your love poems, I can drift into a world without problems, if only for a moment.

Kim Rodrigues August 31, 2017 at 6:58 PM So beautiful, my friend!