On a Whim, We Swim

Sitting by the beach one summers day
I turned to my girlfriend to say
Shall we go for a swim
It's cold not too grim
Splish splashing in love do we play

Two bodies now exit the cold blue
Only one of us appears to be true
Now shapely and pert
Her body so alert
My desire is now to pursue

To the beach towel she says on the turn
My love you've turned into a worm
The cold water has spoken
At least it's a token
When warmed I'm sure it will squirm










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Date: 5/21/2011 4:40:00 AM
a little tongue in cheek - a little double meanings - a little naughty - I like it.
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:44:00 AM
A setting out of where we are right now James.. with an overtone of passionate anticipation in these lines.. lovely and exciting to read luv..
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:41:00 AM
lol, why am I reading this one on a Sunday afternoon is my questions ;) loads of laughter James ;) Congrats on the Rangers win as well x0x0
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:43:00 PM
I very enjoyed the a high humor,James
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:02:00 PM
LOL naughty! but NICE I THINK you want "too" line 4? Light & Love
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:56:00 PM
You are a riot, James! Naughty boy.
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James Fraser
Date: 5/14/2011 2:04:00 PM
If anyone takes my Limericks seriously, they need a straight jacket more than I do. It's fun to be a naughty boy every so often. If it makes people chuckle, mission accomplished. Thank you Andrea for your continuing support, so much appreciated....:)xx
Date: 5/14/2011 10:17:00 AM
You've been busy I see, as always exceptional writes James...
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:05:00 AM
witty, james... lol! nice one here! :) huggs, nette
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James Fraser
Date: 5/14/2011 10:12:00 AM
Many thanks Nette, Limerick's are just so much fun....:)
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