On a Whim, We Swim

Sitting by the beach one summers day
I turned to my girlfriend to say
Shall we go for a swim
It's cold not too grim
Splish splashing in love do we play

Two bodies now exit the cold blue
Only one of us appears to be true
Now shapely and pert
Her body so alert
My desire is now to pursue

To the beach towel she says on the turn
My love you've turned into a worm
The cold water has spoken
At least it's a token
When warmed I'm sure it will squirm










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Dailey Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 4:40 AM
a little tongue in cheek - a little double meanings - a little naughty - I like it.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 8:44 AM
A setting out of where we are right now James.. with an overtone of passionate anticipation in these lines.. lovely and exciting to read luv..
Neels Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 7:41 AM
lol, why am I reading this one on a Sunday afternoon is my questions ;) loads of laughter James ;) Congrats on the Rangers win as well x0x0
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 5:43 PM
I very enjoyed the a high humor,James
Guzzi Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 5:02 PM
LOL naughty! but NICE I THINK you want "too" line 4? Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:56 PM
You are a riot, James! Naughty boy.
Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 2:04 PM
If anyone takes my Limericks seriously, they need a straight jacket more than I do. It's fun to be a naughty boy every so often. If it makes people chuckle, mission accomplished. Thank you Andrea for your continuing support, so much appreciated....:)xx
Deane Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 10:17 AM
You've been busy I see, as always exceptional writes James...
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 10:05 AM
witty, james... lol! nice one here! :) huggs, nette
Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Many thanks Nette, Limerick's are just so much fun....:)
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