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On a Wet Country Road

I’d hoped some salamanders Would be crawling on the road, For a downpour in the country Makes them exit their abode. But I haven’t seen them lately And I looked with every tread. What I noticed, though, were lots and lots Of slimy slugs instead. Like the worms that they resemble They enjoy the ground when wet And emerge from ‘neath the soil With each chance that they may get. In my youth, a salamander I would lift up by the tail But there’s not the same attraction To this skeevy shell-less snail.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/18/2016 10:47:00 AM
good write Ilene
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Date: 8/1/2016 5:41:00 PM
Salamanders I am unfimiliar with but I am well acquainted with slugs eating my new shoots. you make even slugs good to read about Ilene.
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