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On a Warm Spring Day

a ladybug crawls
slowly up a blade of grass...
as wind makes it sway

5/20/19

Contest: Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Dear Heart

Copyright © Tania Kitchin | Year Posted 2019

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May 7, 2020 at 6:19 AM

What is swaying? The grass or the lady bug or both. Well, it got me asking questions.. Enjoyed reading ..Sara

May 7, 2020 at 10:03 AM

sway; to move slowly side to side. Thank you for your visit.

June 22, 2019 at 9:03 PM

Your imagery is softly and serenely beautiful, Tania. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brain's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan

June 23, 2019 at 5:28 AM

Thank you Susan for your kind comments and for stopping by! :)

May 27, 2019 at 9:42 PM

Beautiful image painted by your pen, Tania, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

May 28, 2019 at 4:35 AM

Thank you Eve! :)

Constance La France

May 27, 2019 at 9:24 AM

Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!

May 27, 2019 at 10:22 AM

Thank you Constance for your nice comments and my awesome placement!

Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2019 at 2:53 PM

I can perfectly picture this one. Awesome win, Tania. Congrats to you.

May 26, 2019 at 6:10 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 26, 2019 at 1:34 PM

- Small and beautiful animals, Tania ... lovely written :) - Congratulations on 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 26, 2019 at 6:11 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise!

Richard Lamoureux

May 24, 2019 at 6:45 AM

This is my favourite so far of the nature Haikus I have read so far.

May 24, 2019 at 4:32 PM

Thank you Richard! :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 24, 2019 at 12:14 AM

Great imagery in this Haiku

May 24, 2019 at 5:07 AM

Thank you Allen!

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