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On a Warm Spring Day

a ladybug crawls slowly up a blade of grass... as wind makes it sway 5/20/19 Contest: Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2020 6:19:00 AM

What is swaying? The grass or the lady bug or both. Well, it got me asking questions.. Enjoyed reading ..Sara

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/7/2020 10:03:00 AM

sway; to move slowly side to side. Thank you for your visit.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/22/2019 9:03:00 PM

Your imagery is softly and serenely beautiful, Tania. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brain's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2019 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Susan for your kind comments and for stopping by! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2019 9:42:00 PM

Beautiful image painted by your pen, Tania, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/28/2019 4:35:00 AM

Thank you Eve! :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/27/2019 9:24:00 AM

Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/27/2019 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Constance for your nice comments and my awesome placement!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2019 2:53:00 PM

I can perfectly picture this one. Awesome win, Tania. Congrats to you.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/26/2019 6:10:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2019 1:34:00 PM

- Small and beautiful animals, Tania ... lovely written :) - Congratulations on 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/26/2019 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/24/2019 6:45:00 AM

This is my favourite so far of the nature Haikus I have read so far.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/24/2019 4:32:00 PM

Thank you Richard! :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/24/2019 12:14:00 AM

Great imagery in this Haiku

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/24/2019 5:07:00 AM

Thank you Allen!