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a ladybug crawls slowly up a blade of grass... as wind makes it sway 5/20/19 Contest: Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 5/7/2020 6:19:00 AM
What is swaying? The grass or the lady bug or both. Well, it got me asking questions.. Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/7/2020 10:03:00 AM
sway; to move slowly side to side. Thank you for your visit.
Date: 6/22/2019 9:03:00 PM
Your imagery is softly and serenely beautiful, Tania. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brain's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2019 5:28:00 AM
Thank you Susan for your kind comments and for stopping by! :)
Date: 5/27/2019 9:42:00 PM
Beautiful image painted by your pen, Tania, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/28/2019 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Eve! :)
Date: 5/27/2019 9:24:00 AM
Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/27/2019 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Constance for your nice comments and my awesome placement!
Date: 5/26/2019 2:53:00 PM
I can perfectly picture this one. Awesome win, Tania. Congrats to you.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/26/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 5/26/2019 1:34:00 PM
- Small and beautiful animals, Tania ... lovely written :) - Congratulations on 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/26/2019 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/24/2019 6:45:00 AM
This is my favourite so far of the nature Haikus I have read so far.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/24/2019 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Richard! :)
Date: 5/24/2019 12:14:00 AM
Great imagery in this Haiku
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/24/2019 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Allen!