On A Rainy Evening in The City


Your ear has to be
tuned to hear 
the City's rhythms  
buried below the noise
and be able to discern 
a melody woven through
the dissonant chatter
as in the rumble and splash 
of motorcar tyres moving 
along streets slicked 
with watery reflections
and in the jarring grind
of tram wheels,
screeching brakes 
and warning bells
and in the cadence
of human voices 
as heard in quiet 
conversations and loud 
yells - to feel
a sense of elation when 
all the scattered notes 
of a City come together  
and you hear
its surprising song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/7/2025 3:05:00 AM
This is such a vibe, Paul. You’ve really captured the music hidden in the chaos — like the city’s got its own secret soundtrack if you just stop and listen. Loved the imagery too — rainy streets, tram sounds, reflections — it all paints a vivid scene. Quietly powerful and beautifully observant.
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/8/2025 2:52:00 PM
Thankyou so much Rowena for your thoughtful and positive comments...lapped up to help fuel an old man to attempt another. Always encouraging to learn when a poem speaks to the reader. Apprecisted. Take care, Paul
Date: 8/4/2025 12:15:00 AM
I am not a city fan but being an expat for a long time l have lived in quite a few. At times as a expat in a new country it can be quite lonely and isolating and those city sounds comforted me at those times reminding me there was a world outside my world.Your amazing poem Paul reminded me of those days….and once again l was on a journey! You my lovely friend are”King of the Journeys” haha….love it! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/7/2025 2:35:00 AM
The City always wears two faces, one kind and inviting, the other hard and heartless....a reflection I guess of the inhabitants. Thankyou my dear friend for hopping on for the tram ride...always great company. Take care Deb, Cheers, Paul
Date: 8/3/2025 5:08:00 PM
Once upon a time, I worked in downtown Dallas. I loved 'listening to the city'--it had its own invisible rhythm that only became audible if I paused. I loved the pulse of your poem and of my city. thanks for this poem. Faving.
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Date: 8/7/2025 2:28:00 AM
I think each city has its own unique pulse and rhythm...the trick is to filter out all the extraneous noise. Thanks for your comments Sara, Regards
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