On a Plane

On a plane we sit, confined
With all our freedom left behind.
We cannot move around too much
And with our friends, can’t be in touch.

We eat what we have brought aboard
And in our carry-ons have stored,
Then turn to what we have to read
(Variety is what I need).

If seatmates shut the window shade,
The ones who sleep have got it made
But those who like to look outside
Do sadly have their views denied.

The seatbelts keep us safe, we’re told
But sometimes we get rock and rolled
If turbulence gets out of hand;
We count the minutes ‘til we land.

Distraction really is the key;
At least, it works quite well for me
For if I’m busy, I’m not apt
To ponder how, in flight, we’re trapped.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/6/2019 8:12:00 PM
Exactly! Precisely! This is absolutely how I felt last week flying to and from NYC. Ugh! :) gw
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Date: 6/6/2019 10:27:00 AM
Delighted you are on your travels once more and I know we are in for a treat with your observations which others just fail to notice:-) I enjoy our packed lunches which are always far more palatable than the food the airlines serve and nowadays they are no longer included in the price I had one that was so vile to my tastebuds it put me off eating them anyway lol !hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/5/2019 8:24:00 PM
Hello Ilene, I've been away from PSoup for awhile but decided to post a few and check out "the old neighborhood." I'm glad I found you once again and this little poem is quite the gem! Missed you and hope to hear from you if time allows. Cheers, Terry
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Date: 6/8/2019 7:52:00 PM
so nice to have you visit, terrell! much appreciated! hope you're sticking around for a while...
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