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On a Hill At the Beach

Spread your wings, dear child, and fly to where the green sea meets blue sky; run on the crests of gentle waves and grab the sunlight as it raves about the brightness of the day; float with the sea gulls as they sway upon the friendly winds, and dive with playful dolphins as they jive in the cool waters of the bay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/6/2013 9:36:00 AM
Each progressive syllable adds delight to this wonderful verse. At the conclusion I couldn't help but notice the sand at my feet. Really great writing, my friend.... Jake
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Date: 4/17/2013 1:34:00 AM
- Ohh .... you hit my heart with this delightful poem David! - Thank you! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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David De La Croes
Date: 4/17/2013 6:10:00 AM
Glad a could add to your enjoyment of the day, Anne-Lise! cheers, David
Date: 4/11/2013 6:19:00 PM
Hi David: This is a lovely, whimsical story. Loved seeing the dolphins jive. Thanks for brightening up my afternoon. Love, SuZ
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David De La Croes
Date: 4/12/2013 1:07:00 AM
Thanks, SuZ! This poem was inspired by a photo of my granddaughter, which can be seen at http://truml.com/profiles/85986/photography/98554

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