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On a Collision Course

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worlds collide
as whirlwinds
twirling churn 
in their incessant dance
galaxies waltz around while
unrehearsed a minuet of stars
bounce where winds may blow
meandering
gliding sliding 
on their elliptical courses
travel in stride
skating graceful



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Posted on September 29, 2019

(2021 remake is called Cosmic Dance)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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