On A Cold Winter Day

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Poetry/Diminshed Hexaverse/On A Cold Winter Day
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1691-582-18
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 08, 2024/ Human Written
For the International Contest, A Grounding Technique
Sponsor, Sara Kendrick, Judged 12/16/2024

FIRST PLACE

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See the snow falling 
the frozen trees sway
snowdrifts like mountains
a squirrel running
birds at the feeder

Feel a sadness
deep loneliness
thirsty for love
the pain of death

Hear music
the fireplace
the snowplows

Taste tea
brown toast

Eggs

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/18/2024 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful yet sad write. I enjoyed reading it. A cup of warm tea sounds nice. Wish I could have one with you. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful win. Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........

Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2024 7:43:00 AM

Paula, thank you for the congratultions and for the comment, and compliment, Merry Christmas ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2024 3:41:00 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. I can feel the scene even though we don't get much snow here plus the sadness felt at the loss of a loved one. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2024 5:42:00 AM

Sara, thank you for the contest and my placement, and the nice comment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings~