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Poetry/Diminshed Hexaverse/On A Cold Winter Day
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1691-582-18
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 08, 2024/ Human Written
For the International Contest, A Grounding Technique
Sponsor, Sara Kendrick, Judged 12/16/2024

FIRST PLACE

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See the snow falling the frozen trees sway snowdrifts like mountains a squirrel running birds at the feeder Feel a sadness deep loneliness thirsty for love the pain of death Hear music the fireplace the snowplows Taste tea brown toast Eggs

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Date: 12/18/2024 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful yet sad write. I enjoyed reading it. A cup of warm tea sounds nice. Wish I could have one with you. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful win. Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........
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Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2024 7:43:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratultions and for the comment, and compliment, Merry Christmas ~
Date: 12/17/2024 3:41:00 AM
I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. I can feel the scene even though we don't get much snow here plus the sadness felt at the loss of a loved one. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2024 5:42:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the contest and my placement, and the nice comment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings~
Date: 12/16/2024 8:37:00 PM
Tea!! congratulations dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2024 5:43:00 AM
Thiveni, thank you for the congratulations, love~
Date: 12/16/2024 2:06:00 PM
Lovely and real! Congrats, Constance! A fave!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2024 5:44:00 AM
Kim, thank you for the comment and congrats and FAV, love~
Date: 12/16/2024 9:55:00 AM
- Sitting inside enjoying the winter weather ... lovely poem, Constance ... congratulations :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2024 5:45:00 AM
Anne-Lise,thank you for the comment, compliment, and congratulations, Merry Christmas and hugs~
Date: 12/9/2024 10:58:00 AM
Nice one.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2024 2:45:00 AM
Jay, thank you for the compliment, blessings

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