On a Clear Day - Etheree

Snow
atop
Mount Snowdon
On a clear day
visibility
is unsurmountable,
mist can invade in minutes.
Causing treacherous conditions.
carry extra clothes, maps and whistle.
Look and enjoy the vista unfolded.


Penned 19 September 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 4:04 AM
Beautifully penned with giving good advice Seren to the climbers :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 4:14 AM
Having just read the contest rules I think you may be right... save it for another time:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 4:12 AM
was about to take out of contest didnt think was octobery enough hmmm now am not sure
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