Omnipresent

O’er all the world, He sees
over His vast domain
oh, intimate His thoughts
only toward us, love’s pleas
observed our sin and shame
our curse, He bore on tree
omniscient victory! 







Written on 4/4/2021
Pleiades O Poetry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Great faith based winner in this contest. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Bangalee Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 10:08 PM
Creator, the Almighty- Omnipresent to save us all
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Amazing verse on that word you chose! Congrats.
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 2:18 PM
Laura, congrats on your win with your reverent pleaides! Blessings, Kim M
Roper Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:32 PM
Great write, Laura , congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve
Agustin Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. We praise our Almighty Lord Who's omnipresent. God bless you.
One Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Hey Laura.. I've been away also... Came back after four months. Glad you are ok
Leiser Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 4:00 PM
Same to you, friend! :)
One Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Love how you did this... Hope all is well my friend..
Leiser Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Silent and great to hear from you!! I’ve been away for awhile as I care for my mother and an invalid friend. Hope to write more poetry soon! :)
Callus Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 5:28 AM
This Pleiades is lovely and uplifting, Laura. I expect to see it on the winners' list! Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Paul! :)
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