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My shadowy quondam radiated a crimson hue was alive and moving now it is a ghost emotionless colorless and lethargic a heart rimmed with marigolds the sharp color of bloody mulberry weeps like a crowned raven, on sealed lips, scarlet wine dews succulent but stifling smell of chains is addictive I am enslaved guilty of a deadly love star-stained soul to succumb to luscious vindictiveness. the heart sleeps in flinty rain Lime-scented leaves drip starfish-shaped leaf drops.
Written: January 27, 2023 You Decide Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/31/2023 9:44:00 AM
Lasaad, this poem is pretty amazing with your creative use of language and very inventive imagery! You always bring a very special element of language into your poems. Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend!
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Date: 1/28/2023 7:12:00 AM
Beautifully written Lasaad...such detail. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 1/28/2023 2:19:00 AM
Oh wow! This is a brilliant piece of work, SP, congrats on your inevitable top win
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Date: 1/27/2023 4:39:00 PM
Amazing poem , so gifted you are
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