Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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There is a variety of peach that grows here that turns a mixture of yellow and red..When falls angular light reflects upon them it is as if the field is ablaze with color..Sara

Ominous Clouds Bank

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                                           Ominous clouds bank...
                                    Peach orchard ablaze with fire
                                            Fall's angular light

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Danny Stinson November 20, 2011 at 11:40 PM I love all your poems about fall; it's my favorite season!

Elizabeth Wesley November 14, 2011 at 9:11 PM So special Sara, and the angular light deepens the meaning in your lovely ku.

Russell Sivey November 14, 2011 at 12:05 PM Very well put Sara! I just love clouds and their unique meaning within them! You have a well said Haiku! Awesome work!!

Jim Wilson November 14, 2011 at 7:07 AM I like the way this sets up an image, and then the last line turns it into something more benign; the movement from 'fire' to 'angular light' is well done and adherence to the standard form is gratifying. Thanks, Jim

Virginia Mitchell November 14, 2011 at 6:17 AM Vivid!

Tony Lane November 14, 2011 at 5:58 AM Beautiful fall image Sara. Tony