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Omen Or a Sign

Mourning doves sigh on ice floe clouds
sand dune crickets pierce red dawn shrouds
bull’s-eye squall deluge from on high
on ice floe clouds mourning doves sigh

Vapour trails omen or a sign
grand stream whirls silver mist divine
blackbirds snatch and claw eggshell pails
omen or a sign vapour trails 

Golden oak valley‘s crystal belt
Blue lagoons ripple where hearts melt  
campfire hoolies spark woodland folk
valley’s crystal belt golden oak 

Withered spot in dim twilight phase
dark moon whispers cloak glow worm rays
damp squid thunder blights skyline plot
in dim twilight phase withered spot



Date written ; June 22nd 2020

Date posted ; July 3rd 2022

Contest Name ; 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 6 
        
         Sponsor ; Mark Toney

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/25/2021 2:44:00 AM
Well worked piece,while original does harp back to poetry of past. Each line packing a punch of its own. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 8/1/2020 10:35:00 PM
This is pure elegance painted in a picturesque muse Howard. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win :)
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Howard Kerr
Date: 8/2/2020 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Aditi for your generous comments which by themselves are poetic in nature. Howard
Date: 7/29/2020 7:13:00 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2020 7:25:00 PM
Constance, Thanks for your soup mail and the contest win for a work that has a special place in my heart. Howard
Date: 7/29/2020 3:01:00 PM
Brimming with impression. Mystical wondering. Vivid placement inside this forest. Nice form of course too!
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:22:00 PM
Hello Sigrid, Thanks for your detailed and constructive comments on this work and the time involved which is always a precious commodity. Howard

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