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Mourning doves sigh on ice floe clouds sand dune crickets pierce red dawn shrouds bull’s-eye squall deluge from on high on ice floe clouds mourning doves sigh Vapour trails omen or a sign grand stream whirls silver mist divine Black birds snatch and claw eggshell pails omen or a sign vapour trails Golden oak valley‘s crystal belt Blue lagoons ripple where hearts melt campfire hoolies spark woodland folk valley’s crystal belt golden oak Withered spot in dim twilight phase dark moon whispers cloak glow worm rays damp squid thunder blights skyline plot in dim twilight phase withered spot Name Of Contest : Swap Quatrain Date Judged : July 10th 2020

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Date: 8/1/2020 10:35:00 PM
This is pure elegance painted in a picturesque muse Howard. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win :)
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Howard Kerr
Date: 8/2/2020 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Aditi for your generous comments which by themselves are poetic in nature. Howard
Date: 7/29/2020 7:13:00 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2020 7:25:00 PM
Constance, Thanks for your soup mail and the contest win for a work that has a special place in my heart. Howard
Date: 7/29/2020 3:01:00 PM
Brimming with impression. Mystical wondering. Vivid placement inside this forest. Nice form of course too!
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:22:00 PM
Hello Sigrid, Thanks for your detailed and constructive comments on this work and the time involved which is always a precious commodity. Howard
Date: 7/8/2020 10:31:00 AM
Howard, Every poetry form you write is pure gold. You are a master at this wonderful art we poets paint. You are the top, "Word Artist ."
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Date: 7/8/2020 2:47:00 PM
From the Queen Of Poetry who penned Depart and Night Waters among other classics I am deeply honoured. In every way much appreciated, Regina. Howard