Omen

Along lush woods that slither on hills between Evening of Life recalls a town ,so quaint For joyride cruising new borders, my dream! Though on sharp ridge, pale oak warns of restraint. Held by twisted stems coiled on ruined track Grasses freeze, sad among twigs from the glen More sad than death, or all deaths can exact A calling of Time stirring its bleak omen. In a wham, a daze passes through my head Scenes of auto crash splinter like ripped gown, Thrown in a realm farther than black-wired sky My body sprawled on pools of blood’s seabed. Succumbing to visions erased by clear light Pulse rouses to chimes of Amazing Grace; A gruesome day I won’t relive, despite Promises of thrills that wait to amaze. What I Woudn't Want To Relive Contest Sponsor: Black-Eyed Susan
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February 10, 2014 at 4:27 PM
Nette, .. I WOULDN'T want to relive this either. Loving it ~SKAT~
Carrillo Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 5:18 PM
This is a great poem for the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Way to go with this winning work...Congrats..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 5:21 PM
I was in a car accident in 1985 and it is a surreal feeling, everything happens quickly in slow motion. Congrats on a fine win Nette.
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 9:44 PM
Congratulation for a fine win in the contest. enjoyed the poem, nette
Horsch Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, A wonderfully Written poem. Hugs Roger
Carrillo Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 4:29 PM
A great poem that I enjoyed reafing. It is also great for the contest. Thamks for sharing and many blessings for the new year.... Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 10:00 PM
btw, I wanted to compliment you on your judging of your last contest. The first and second places that I read were exactly how I would have placed them too. They were the very best in the bunch. Oh, and thanks for my placement as well and for supporting me at my blog
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 9:59 PM
oooh, it sounds awful what happened!! this makes me want to know more about what happened to you and any others involved. Good writing!
B Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 11:43 AM
Nette, this is an exceptional piece of poetry. You capture the essence of not wanting to relive something so tragic, yet at the same time you note the validity of the experience and why it happened. Thank you for sharing and stopping by my work! -Tim
Anglesey Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 6:17 PM
WOw... very powerfully imaged with slicing emotion. Well done :)
Mcdaid Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 12:31 PM
powerfully penned piece happy new year
Carroll Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Hi Nette, Awe inspiring write..thanks for sharing. Ken.
Neels Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 10:07 AM
Another awesome write Nette, wishing you the best for the contest as well. Happy New Year to you and your loved ones *hugs*
Manassian Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 8:07 AM
My parents were involved in a car accident when I was 14...both wound up with massive injuries and had to spend many days in the intensive care unit...I would NOT want to repeat that experience again. You wrote the sense of foreboding here so well, Nette. Nature was alerting you of the danger. If there is a true incident, I'm so glad you survived. May this New Year be filled with blessings and love. Hugs from me! Eileen
Virden Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Amazing you survived to write about it, and so very glad you did! Happy New year sweet one. <3 hugs
Jones Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 9:21 PM
So glad you survived this horrible experience nette...a winning example for sure...
Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Yes Nette no matter our troubles here on earrth the promise of eternal life removes the fear of death. blessings Carl
Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 7:53 PM
Yes Nette no matter our troubles here on earrth the promise of eternal life removes the fear of death
Nair Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 5:22 PM
I too wish you a new year, great beyond all expectations, my dear friend. The omens are right, luv, Jag!!
Sivey Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 3:47 PM
This poem is exactly a Nette inspired work of art! You know how to write masterpieces such as this one my friend! And I agree, I doubt that I would want to relive that occurrence that you described here! Somethings are just best left in the past and not relive again! I really enjoyed reading this immaculate gem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Datu Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 11:53 AM
A gripping poem, Nette. How you express yourself is amazingly beautiful, the emotions there create an aura of action and deliverance.Again,a signature all your own. Happy New Year!
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 11:50 AM
- Woooow ..... Nette .... quite a poem ... reeks of skill and deep feelings..... !!!!!!!! - - You've posted a winning poem !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Nette, this is just wonderful, I love it, very well written, have a great New Year….David
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December 28, 2013 at 10:48 AM
wow what wonderful poetry i return too, although not surprised when i see the your name beneath such inspiring words.... happy new year to you, dear Nette,,,
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