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Along lush woods that slither on hills between Evening of Life recalls a town ,so quaint For joyride cruising new borders, my dream! Though on sharp ridge, pale oak warns of restraint. Held by twisted stems coiled on ruined track Grasses freeze, sad among twigs from the glen More sad than death, or all deaths can exact A calling of Time stirring its bleak omen. In a wham, a daze passes through my head Scenes of auto crash splinter like ripped gown, Thrown in a realm farther than black-wired sky My body sprawled on pools of blood’s seabed. Succumbing to visions erased by clear light Pulse rouses to chimes of Amazing Grace; A gruesome day I won’t relive, despite Promises of thrills that wait to amaze. What I Woudn't Want To Relive Contest Sponsor: Black-Eyed Susan

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Date: 2/10/2014 4:27:00 PM
Nette, .. I WOULDN'T want to relive this either. Loving it ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/15/2014 5:18:00 PM
This is a great poem for the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 1/13/2014 10:10:00 AM
Way to go with this winning work...Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/10/2014 5:21:00 PM
I was in a car accident in 1985 and it is a surreal feeling, everything happens quickly in slow motion. Congrats on a fine win Nette.
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Date: 1/9/2014 9:44:00 PM
Congratulation for a fine win in the contest. enjoyed the poem, nette
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Date: 1/9/2014 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, A wonderfully Written poem. Hugs Roger
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Date: 1/3/2014 4:29:00 PM
A great poem that I enjoyed reafing. It is also great for the contest. Thamks for sharing and many blessings for the new year.... Lucilla
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Date: 1/2/2014 10:00:00 PM
btw, I wanted to compliment you on your judging of your last contest. The first and second places that I read were exactly how I would have placed them too. They were the very best in the bunch. Oh, and thanks for my placement as well and for supporting me at my blog
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Date: 1/2/2014 9:59:00 PM
oooh, it sounds awful what happened!! this makes me want to know more about what happened to you and any others involved. Good writing!
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Date: 12/30/2013 11:43:00 AM
Nette, this is an exceptional piece of poetry. You capture the essence of not wanting to relive something so tragic, yet at the same time you note the validity of the experience and why it happened. Thank you for sharing and stopping by my work! -Tim
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Date: 12/29/2013 6:17:00 PM
WOw... very powerfully imaged with slicing emotion. Well done :)
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Date: 12/29/2013 12:31:00 PM
powerfully penned piece happy new year
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Date: 12/29/2013 11:42:00 AM
Hi Nette, Awe inspiring write..thanks for sharing. Ken.
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Date: 12/29/2013 10:07:00 AM
Another awesome write Nette, wishing you the best for the contest as well. Happy New Year to you and your loved ones *hugs*
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Date: 12/29/2013 8:07:00 AM
My parents were involved in a car accident when I was 14...both wound up with massive injuries and had to spend many days in the intensive care unit...I would NOT want to repeat that experience again. You wrote the sense of foreboding here so well, Nette. Nature was alerting you of the danger. If there is a true incident, I'm so glad you survived. May this New Year be filled with blessings and love. Hugs from me! Eileen
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Date: 12/29/2013 12:12:00 AM
Amazing you survived to write about it, and so very glad you did! Happy New year sweet one. <3 hugs
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Date: 12/28/2013 9:21:00 PM
So glad you survived this horrible experience nette...a winning example for sure...
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Date: 12/28/2013 7:54:00 PM
Yes Nette no matter our troubles here on earrth the promise of eternal life removes the fear of death. blessings Carl
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Date: 12/28/2013 7:53:00 PM
Yes Nette no matter our troubles here on earrth the promise of eternal life removes the fear of death
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Date: 12/28/2013 5:22:00 PM
I too wish you a new year, great beyond all expectations, my dear friend. The omens are right, luv, Jag!!
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Date: 12/28/2013 3:47:00 PM
This poem is exactly a Nette inspired work of art! You know how to write masterpieces such as this one my friend! And I agree, I doubt that I would want to relive that occurrence that you described here! Somethings are just best left in the past and not relive again! I really enjoyed reading this immaculate gem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/28/2013 11:53:00 AM
A gripping poem, Nette. How you express yourself is amazingly beautiful, the emotions there create an aura of action and deliverance.Again,a signature all your own. Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/28/2013 11:50:00 AM
- Woooow ..... Nette .... quite a poem ... reeks of skill and deep feelings..... !!!!!!!! - - You've posted a winning poem !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2013 11:42:00 AM
Nette, this is just wonderful, I love it, very well written, have a great New Year….David
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Date: 12/28/2013 10:48:00 AM
wow what wonderful poetry i return too, although not surprised when i see the your name beneath such inspiring words.... happy new year to you, dear Nette,,,
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