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TECHNOLOGY ... Has made us FAR More fragile as a civilization ... The further technology takes us, The more vulnerable we are as a race, And the farther we will fall into chaos when It breaks down ... and it will certainly, someday ... Break ... DOWN.

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John Hamilton

Date: 3/9/2017 11:00:00 AM

Great write Greg so full of meaning!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 1:43:00 AM

Thank you, John!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/5/2017 3:57:00 PM

Well written and fantastically illustrated ;)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 1:42:00 AM

Very kind of you, Maureen ... thanks! :-)

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/5/2017 8:49:00 AM

A clear true message here in this , yes :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 1:42:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi! :-)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/5/2017 6:11:00 AM

Very true, Greg:)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/5/2017 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Joe!

Darren White

Date: 3/5/2017 4:26:00 AM

I love the way you formed the poem graphically, it so enhances the message. As if you indeed step down that cliff.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/5/2017 4:36:00 AM

Thanks so much, Darren ... much appreciated!

Edward Mccall

Date: 3/4/2017 7:35:00 AM

it is so true what you said Greg we as a race have become too dependent on technology. And I shutter to think what will happen when Technology does break down. Also a great mem, Wiley coyote is the poster child for improper use of technology.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/5/2017 4:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Edward ... I, too, felt Wile E. was the perfect poster "boy" for the misuse of technology, lol, though I always rooted for him just a bit. ;-)