Ollyver My Gem - Trois Par Huit Form

Congratulations on your New win. What a fun write/story. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................

Thank you for entering this poetry contest Andrea, and congratulations on your Glory placing win! :)

Congrats on your HM Andrea... for a wonderful write .. a wonderful honor.. have not gotten to my yahoos yet... slow go today... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Congrats on placing in my contest Andrea..... I hope to see you in my Rondel contest......:JP}

p.s. you got soup mail= funny lady

so you don't know what happened to Ollyver? wherever he is , I hope he is well and at least he was lucky enough to have been taken care by you--10 years that is a long time...& that trois par huit of mine was inspired by my chocolate craving heehee not necessarily the business (it's more of a hobby these days)--maybe I'll try to come up with something about truffles soon!

What a unique spelling for your gem, Ollyver--was he your only dog? And thanks for the tip, I think I'll change mine from free-verse to rhyme--haha that does make sense!

GOT YOUR OLLYVER COMMENT, CAN U BELIEVE I COT THE CILLY'S JUST ON THE PART WHERE YOU SAID. ABOUT HIM PASSING AND U SAW HIM IN YOUR DREAM..YIKES IT HAPPENED AGAIN. I FEEL WHAT U SAID, SAD U HAD 2 GIVE HIM UP BECAUSE OF YOUR HUBBY. WANT ME 2 WRITE ONE ABOUT HIM, LOL, JUST KIDDING. I ONLY SAID THAT DO TO MYSELF ALWAYS DISING MINE. I DO LOVE MINE DEARLY, AT LEAST I THINK I DO,LOL. LOVE IRMA

very lovely indeed!

I had a kitty - "snowly white" - slept by my ear for 17 years, Andrea. I echo your last lines with a tear. Love, Dave

hah, thats cute. a dog can be a woman's best friend too.lol for some.i like cats, so mysteriousss(: -Always&Forever Lynette

What a lovely penned tribute to your dog, Andrea! Enjoyed reading your poem today and best of luck in Jared's contest...Gert

Very sweet and nice .. I have to redo my entry because of the centering.. I have the new laptop today as Ron brought it to me just now... yesterday at computer bar at Deb's suggestion in Florida now... so off for fun in the sun ..or otherwise.... so now I have one ..and NOT allowed on sand... haha... good luck in Jared's contest... if I cannot center mine it will stay in as is... I don't have time to do all that right now....luv.. Linda-Marie

What a wonderful poem, of a snoy white dog, not too bright, I just loved it..

Nicely done in both rhyme and formation. I could feel the fur! Good Luck in the contest. Dan C

Very interesting theme of nicely rhymed Trois Par Huit. Good luck

My experience with my own doggies...the dumber they are, the more loving they are!! So be glad Ollyver is not too bright!! Bet he's a real gem for sure!! :) Love this!

They're even cuter when they're "not bright," Andrea. I can see why you'd miss such a sweet, furry friend. Love your poem! Carolyn

WOW, WHAT A PET, LOVELY. tHE BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST, SWEET 1 . SEEMS U HAVE A FAN CLUB ANDREA do you blame them. Looks as if your poem came naturaly, always a friend, IRMA

This poem melts me Andrea...I felt the same way about my Iguana EJ who past after many years with me. Great touch here ! james

love it Andrea, flows it right all the way to the end. It is almost as you owned him at one time,(Ollyver)..... is he a true Eskimo dog, anyway i love it. Good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Wow ... That is so good! thats the reason you in my Fav. poet list love Michael