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Ollie, Ollie, the reddish sun is coming up, Mother's in the kitchen filling the teacup, Teddy bear awaits fantastic adventure today, Walk softly little Ollie, 'til shadows go away. Ollie, Ollie, green grassy fields are calling, Frogs are croaking, and rooster is bawling, Time is swift, but the days are growing long, Making way for the frenzied summer throng! Written on 3/10/2021 Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 3/18/2021 10:32:00 AM
Congrats on this winner in Eve's contest. I think a little one would enjoy this one being quoted or read to them. It has good rhythm and flow. Sara
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/18/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. I was trying to create a rhyme that children would love to hear, so your lovely remarks are quite nice. :)
Date: 3/12/2021 3:59:00 AM
- Back with congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/12/2021 10:26:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Date: 3/11/2021 5:24:00 PM
Great nursery rhyme, Evelyn, very creative, with rhythm and flow. Congratulations on your win. hugs Eve
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/12/2021 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Think nothing of it. hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/11/2021 8:53:00 PM
I apologize for the typo, I redid it... I used my cell phone and I should had reread the comment.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2021 7:37:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and for sponsoring such an interesting and fun contest, Eve. :)
Date: 3/11/2021 5:18:00 PM
By Golly, this Ollie's a winner! Way to go, Evelyn! :) gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2021 7:35:00 PM
Thank you for those positive thoughts, Gershon. :D
Date: 3/11/2021 3:46:00 PM
Hey Evelyn, I think that darned rooster lives behind my back fence. Nice write. Terry
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2021 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Terry. I was wondering where that scamp had gone off to. :D
Date: 3/11/2021 2:11:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2021 7:30:00 PM
Thank you for your warm congratulations, Alexis. You have a nice evening. :=) Evelyn
Date: 3/11/2021 4:28:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Evelyn ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2021 9:05:00 AM
You have my heartfelt thanks, Anne-Lise. :=) hugs
Date: 3/10/2021 9:42:00 PM
Delightful poem, Evelyn. It exudes fun and happiness.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2021 9:04:00 AM
I'm glad my words had the intended effect. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 3/10/2021 8:19:00 PM
Nice one, Evelyn. It flowed so nicely. I can imagine any little kid want to hear this again and again. Good luck in the contest.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2021 9:02:00 AM
Your inspiriting remarks are very much appreciated, L Milton.
Date: 3/10/2021 5:16:00 PM
what a fun poem Evelyn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/10/2021 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. hugs xx :=)

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