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Oliver Awakens-Nursery Rhyme

Ollie, Ollie, the reddish sun is coming up,
Mother's in the kitchen filling the teacup,
Teddy bear awaits fantastic adventure today,
Walk softly little Ollie, 'til shadows go away.

Ollie, Ollie, green grassy fields are calling,
Frogs are croaking, and rooster is bawling,
Time is swift, but the days are growing long,
Making way for the frenzied summer throng!


Written on 3/10/2021
Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper

Copyright © Evelyn Judy Buehler | Year Posted 2021

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/18/2021 10:32:00 AM Congrats on this winner in Eve's contest. I think a little one would enjoy this one being quoted or read to them. It has good rhythm and flow. Sara Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/18/2021 10:51:00 AM Thank you so much, Sara. I was trying to create a rhyme that children would love to hear, so your lovely remarks are quite nice. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2021 3:59:00 AM - Back with congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/12/2021 10:26:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Eve Roper Date: 3/11/2021 5:24:00 PM Great nursery rhyme, Evelyn, very creative, with rhythm and flow. Congratulations on your win. hugs Eve Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/12/2021 10:28:00 AM Thank you, Eve. Think nothing of it. hugs Eve Roper Date: 3/11/2021 8:53:00 PM I apologize for the typo, I redid it... I used my cell phone and I should had reread the comment. Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/11/2021 7:37:00 PM Thank you for your kind words and for sponsoring such an interesting and fun contest, Eve. :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/11/2021 5:18:00 PM By Golly, this Ollie's a winner! Way to go, Evelyn! :) gw Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/11/2021 7:35:00 PM Thank you for those positive thoughts, Gershon. :D

Terry Flood Date: 3/11/2021 3:46:00 PM Hey Evelyn, I think that darned rooster lives behind my back fence. Nice write. Terry Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/11/2021 7:32:00 PM Thank you, Terry. I was wondering where that scamp had gone off to. :D

Alexis Y. Date: 3/11/2021 2:11:00 PM Hi Evelyn, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/11/2021 7:30:00 PM Thank you for your warm congratulations, Alexis. You have a nice evening. :=) Evelyn

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/11/2021 4:28:00 AM - Lovely poem, Evelyn ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/11/2021 9:05:00 AM You have my heartfelt thanks, Anne-Lise. :=) hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/10/2021 9:42:00 PM Delightful poem, Evelyn. It exudes fun and happiness. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/11/2021 9:04:00 AM I'm glad my words had the intended effect. Thank you so much. :)

L Milton Hankins Date: 3/10/2021 8:19:00 PM Nice one, Evelyn. It flowed so nicely. I can imagine any little kid want to hear this again and again. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/11/2021 9:02:00 AM Your inspiriting remarks are very much appreciated, L Milton.

Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2021 5:16:00 PM what a fun poem Evelyn:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/10/2021 7:05:00 PM Thank you, Jan. hugs xx :=)