Oliver


 
He put the shovel in the earth
With dry eyed dread he shakes his head
He's not a man to show emotion
He'll do the job, dig up ground
go through the motions,  build up the mound
before the evening sun goes down.

His wife and son are standing by
While clouds swell up and tears are cried
that stem from grief they cannot hide 
....

They stand aside, and he begins

Beside him in the crate, homemade,
so carefully the dog was laid.
Old "Oliver", was his best friend
but this is where that story ends.

Love came to them, from who knows where
and with it came a million woes
of muddy paws and ticks and fleas
of broken screens, and mother's screams
of slippers torn, and growing pains

And a love like no one understands
until they've known this kind, unplanned.

Concealed are tears he will not shed
He's not a man to show his pain
He motions them to come, and bring
a worn-out shoe, a toy or two
to lay within the disturbed ground

And then beneath the chestnut tree 
He puts the crate into the grave
Then shovels in the dirt again…

They walk away, and the sun goes down,
without a word, without a sound

Sometimes such silence has a thousand words to say



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8/9/16
For Contest: "Camouflage Me A Poem"
Sponsor: Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/12/2016 10:48:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing and emotional poem, as a pet owner I was weeping by the end, the loss of a pet is a pain like no other ~
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Date: 8/12/2016 3:02:00 PM
Such a moving poem Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/11/2016 5:58:00 PM
Such a heartfelt write, Carrie. Your visual and emotional imagery are so powerful. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/11/2016 10:20:00 AM
Nice, smooth rhymes, Carrie. Congrats! As I was reading this I kept thinking of Hillary barking like a dog. Crazy things pop into our heads at the most unexpected moments. :-)
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Date: 8/11/2016 8:44:00 AM
The poem exudes sadness...Well written Carrie...Congrats on your win....
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Date: 8/11/2016 8:03:00 AM
Aww, this is sad and sweet at the same time.
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Date: 8/11/2016 4:22:00 AM
A lovely poem, Carrie:) Reminded me of the day our dear Blackie died..Congratulations on your wonderful win:)
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Date: 8/10/2016 11:10:00 PM
Carrie, this is an excellent poem!!! Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:50:00 PM
a powerful poem about the love we have for our pets, Carrie. Very creative approach you took with this one. I am so glad to share a first place with you and the other ladies who wrote such great stories. Congrats.
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:36:00 PM
Carrie, this is so sad, and the way you wrote it expresses such grief...congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/10/2016 4:35:00 AM
Carrie, this poem is so moving. I got a call from my daughter tonight and she was crying. Her dog got out and was hit by a car and killed. We love our animals like they are part of us and it is so sad when they die. Of all nights to read this poem...I feel so sad. I hope this beautiful sad poem gets the attention it deserves Carrie. ; ) 7
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:48:00 AM
Oh no, Connie, I am so sorry to hear such sad news on the same night I was compelled to write this poem. We have lost some dear friends, our dogs, over the years, it can be so heart breaking, especially for a man (my husband is an example) who rarely shows his tears. These are the moments his strength will break down, and it is shattering. I'm so sad for your daughter and family
Date: 8/10/2016 1:53:00 AM
Thundering emotions express in a lightning manner. Good luck my dear, Carrie. A seven
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Date: 8/9/2016 9:58:00 PM
Very emotional, lovely
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