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You never go unnoticed You choose to be different And carry it with humble pride You dare to take the stares As you idly walk the streets Where you don’t seem to fit in Like a character Out of its time Out of its place You stand out And make us normal people Stop and stare and Maybe some of us stop to think Every once in a while I will think back and see Your eyes, your look To me you’re a question mark About society’s value system And the price we put on A smile, a touch, a kind word A hug, a chat I saw you again today After so many years Just a few yards away But I didn’t have the time To say hello and ask how you’d been I never have the time To stop and listen AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on September 15, 2017 for contest IMAGE ME A POEM sponsored by MYSTIC ROSE

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Date: 9/16/2017 10:05:00 AM
Delightful and adventurous!
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:19:00 PM
Have a great weekend. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 9/16/2017 9:59:00 AM
A touching poem about the realities of society and its treatment / ideas of perhaps those less fortunate??- Loved the line "..and the price we put on A smile.... I think that's somewhat true whether we want to admit it or not.
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thanks for your comment.

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