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You never go unnoticed
You choose to be different
And carry it with humble pride
You dare to take the stares
As you idly walk the streets
Where you don’t seem to fit in
Like a character
Out of its time
Out of its place
You stand out
And make us normal people
Stop and stare and
Maybe some of us stop to think
Every once in a while
I will think back and see
Your eyes, your look
To me you’re a question mark
About society’s value system
And the price we put on
A smile, a touch, a kind word
A hug, a chat
I saw you again today
After so many years
Just a few yards away
But I didn’t have the time
To say hello and ask how you’d been
I never have the time
To stop and listen



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on September 15, 2017 for contest IMAGE ME A POEM sponsored by MYSTIC ROSE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/16/2017 10:05:00 AM
Delightful and adventurous!
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:19:00 PM
Have a great weekend. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 9/16/2017 9:59:00 AM
A touching poem about the realities of society and its treatment / ideas of perhaps those less fortunate??- Loved the line "..and the price we put on A smile.... I think that's somewhat true whether we want to admit it or not.
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thanks for your comment.

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