Old Sweet Mary-Jane and Jimmy

Jim's mother in-law old sweet Mary-Jane
accused him again and put him to shame
for leaving his poo
all over her loo
I wonder who pushed her out of the train.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:14 PM
lol....nicely done
Vaso Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 1:13 PM
LOL Hilarious ! Loved this!
Callus Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 11:50 AM
An excellent end twist, Charm. I would insert this Limerick in the black humour category! I see a sure winner:) Regards // paul
Turner Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Charmaine, Your funny bone is exposed:) Very funny. Great to see your sense of humor.
Green Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 8:49 AM
I love this one, really fun to read and funny to picture in mind. Good luck in the contest.
Smith Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 6:47 AM
Lol... awesome : )...gave me a smile
P  Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Funny shyte, pun intended. :)
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