Old Sol Took a Holiday

Admonished old Sol for the holiday he took Disappeared for a weekend when big plans were booked Next time he tries that Gonna give him a slap Cept I fear my hand will need to be replaced with a hook
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cunningham Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Ouch , can smell the burning flesh, barbecue time lol
Ellison Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Has kind of a certain attractive odor though!!! Yummy!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:01 AM
That's a good burn ;p xomo
Ellison Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:14 AM
One good burn deserves another??? XOX
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