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Old Sol Took a Holiday

Admonished old Sol for the holiday he took Disappeared for a weekend when big plans were booked Next time he tries that Gonna give him a slap Cept I fear my hand will need to be replaced with a hook

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/26/2018 12:38:00 PM
Ouch , can smell the burning flesh, barbecue time lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/26/2018 2:42:00 PM
Has kind of a certain attractive odor though!!! Yummy!
Date: 6/26/2018 8:01:00 AM
That's a good burn ;p xomo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/26/2018 8:14:00 AM
One good burn deserves another??? XOX

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