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Copyright, M.L. Kiser, 2014

Life’s road is never straight, instead the directions senseless; a twisting, turning labyrinth of adventures and challenges. It wears down the spirit, more than the shoes. Dangers faced with support can breed courage. The road walked alone, can harden the mildest soul, building an unbreakable wall. The façade worn is often mis-interpreted, but the shoes reveal every challenge and hardship. All of the masks we wear cannot hide the life history written in our shoes. Like the lines in the face, old shoes fill in the blanks left after we don yet another, facade. Old shoes are the portraits of our journey in life. Don’t throw them away, put them on display and they’ll keep you humble. One should never forget where they’ve been. It’s in the forgetting that we fail ourselves. Contemplate where you’ve been, to decide the next turn, you must make.
2-6-2022 A STRAND (1067) Poetry Contest BrianStrand

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Date: 2/13/2022 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on you win, M.L., I enjoyed this introspective poem. The comparisons were spot on, and the wisdom shared, much appreciated. Those old shoes hold the secrets of the path taken; many lessons from them and those paths to be learned. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/10/2022 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Yes, old shoes are the best. They can tell a story just "Like the lines in the face." I hate new shoes. They always hurt for a week or two. Have a blessed day...........................
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Date: 1/27/2022 11:05:00 AM
Ditto, Gershon! My mother-in-law was forever tossing out my comfortable shoes!
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Date: 2/4/2022 12:05:00 PM
There's nothing quite as comfortable, is there? Thanks Rico.
Date: 1/27/2022 5:04:00 AM
Insightful poem about life: One should never forget where they’ve been. It’s in the forgetting that we fail ourselves.. so well said! Enjoyed your poem in superb metaphors.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/4/2022 12:05:00 PM
Absolutely and thanks for stopping by.
Date: 1/26/2022 11:28:00 PM
Great advice. The future will determine our heavenly place.
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Date: 2/4/2022 12:05:00 PM
True, thanks Victor.
Date: 1/26/2022 7:11:00 PM
Never would have thunk this without your pen, M.L. What a great idea: Romantic, sentimental, and the right thing to do! (Now, how do I keep my wife from finding these treasures and throwing them out?! lol). :) gw
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Date: 2/4/2022 12:04:00 PM
Ha, thanks Gershon and I hope your shoes live long and prosper!

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