Notes About The Poem

Related image

Old Photographs

In the attic-  I found a dusty album,
        of great mama, going back from death to baptism.
And I took a trip timeworn and so sweet to fathom,
    snap shots old, someone that loved had placed with wisdom;
first, is a faint snap of a baby in Autumn,
and then, black and white, bleached out, disappearing pictures,
        of great mama, going back from death to baptism;
pose to pose, a story is told that still life  C A P T U R E S. 

Here, is a little girl clutching a reluctant cat,
       and great mama as a young woman in a strange hat.
A snap of family as in a garden they sat,
    and here you balance a bike as you stop to chat;
I only recall you with a double chin and fat.
All day, I looked at old snaps on thick black pages,
      and great mama as a young woman in a strange hat;
and beneath a wedding trellis throwing  K I S S E S. 

But one photo makes me pause- touches my heart,
      of six young men in a photo hand colored like art.
These smiling faces soon to war will be torn apart,
    and on the back, their names in ink someone did chart.
On a list of the war dead these men are part,
neatly folded beside their photo to remind us;
       of six young men in a photo hand colored like art.
Each photo within this album is a moment  B R E A T H L E S S .
  Weeping, I hold the book of photographs to my heart . . .  


___________________________
November 3, 2017


Poetry/Rhyme/Old Photographs
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9783-49-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.

____________________
Written for the contest, Rhyme Time II 
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on first place. Very deservingly
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace