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Old Old Fireworks Stored

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                                            Old old fireworks stored
                                          Gave permission to use up...
                                               Rocket misfired fire

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James Fraser

July 17, 2010 at 11:44 AM

Koolio explosive Haiku Sara, ooo i have you stumped on my poem "Nightfall Awakens" > have a great day >> James

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2010 at 12:13 PM

hey, one I missed here! A holiday warning this one was! I'll see ya, I am outta here for the day at least. LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 3, 2010 at 5:24 PM

definitely a different take on fireworks, giving ample warning about old fireworks...thanks for sharing Sara! --nikko :)

Grace Eunsong Lee

July 2, 2010 at 11:29 PM

Maybe I'm not supposed to find this funny but it was so wittily written! Thanks for sharing. :) -Grace

Gert W. Knop

July 1, 2010 at 1:09 PM

I still remember when thathappened in China! Well written Haiku for the contest and good luck!..And thanks for your kind comments...Gert

Joseph Spence Sr

July 1, 2010 at 11:16 AM

The imagery is just a ball of flame. I have observed such a misfiring before and am able to see the imagery quite clearly. Great job! Joseph

De R

July 1, 2010 at 8:22 AM

Great write..good luck in the contest, Sarah!:) Emily

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 1, 2010 at 6:30 AM

Interesting Haiku Sara.. good luck in the contest if so entered... like your third line... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. aloha.. from another luau just over.. WoW...