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Old Old Fireworks Stored

. Old old fireworks stored Gave permission to use up... Rocket misfired fire

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James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2010 11:44:00 AM

Koolio explosive Haiku Sara, ooo i have you stumped on my poem "Nightfall Awakens" > have a great day >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2010 12:13:00 PM

hey, one I missed here! A holiday warning this one was! I'll see ya, I am outta here for the day at least. LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2010 5:24:00 PM

definitely a different take on fireworks, giving ample warning about old fireworks...thanks for sharing Sara! --nikko :)

Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 7/2/2010 11:29:00 PM

Maybe I'm not supposed to find this funny but it was so wittily written! Thanks for sharing. :) -Grace

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/1/2010 1:09:00 PM

I still remember when thathappened in China! Well written Haiku for the contest and good luck!..And thanks for your kind comments...Gert

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/1/2010 11:16:00 AM

The imagery is just a ball of flame. I have observed such a misfiring before and am able to see the imagery quite clearly. Great job! Joseph

De R

Date: 7/1/2010 8:22:00 AM

Great write..good luck in the contest, Sarah!:) Emily

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/1/2010 6:30:00 AM

Interesting Haiku Sara.. good luck in the contest if so entered... like your third line... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. aloha.. from another luau just over.. WoW...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/1/2010 5:23:00 AM

cute one---How about for a last line, Rocket caused/started wildfire?

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 7/1/2010 5:09:00 AM

this poem reminds me of newyear...great write as usual Sara!

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/1/2010 4:51:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, and an appropriate time to warn others of this danger.