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Old Mister Sol

The sun is shining what more could we ask Makes a huge difference when in its rays we do bask Attitudes are governed By how much is uncovered It's a joyous day when Mr. Sol removes his mask

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/18/2018 8:19:00 AM
It was extremely hot here today, high 30s and a good day for the beach. Hear you are swaying somewhat, tossing between coming to OZ and Brazil?? Cant back out of that judging position now, its all been arranged. The list is filling up fast with these bikini entrants. Lol....Maria xox
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2018 10:19:00 AM
Holy crapola!!! Haven't yet seen you in a bikini BUT I can tell you'd be stunning... how do I know??? I'm a master at it... can read you like a book!!! Just know... you are twirling my twirler, Miss Maria!!! Whatta a charmer eh!!! Love you sweet thing... Happy Jack XOXOXOX
Date: 3/18/2018 7:03:00 AM
You'll love Jan and Nina's You three will have to do a triple collaboration, sailing close to the wind lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2018 7:23:00 AM
Has that ever been tried before??? Could go down in history as The Souper Poopers!!!
Date: 3/18/2018 6:40:00 AM
lol Jack, its blowing a gale hear and wer have squally snow showers - not quite sunbathing wearer. i'm putting more clothes on not taking them off lol. Please drop by my latest poem, its a collaboration and i think you will get a real giggle my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2018 6:54:00 AM
I shall meander over dear sis!!! We're having a week of sunshine BUT still freaking cold!!! WHERE IS SPRING??? Love to you dear Miss Jan::: Happy, Jack XOX
Date: 3/18/2018 6:33:00 AM
Back to 5 lims I see.... Yes we do not like it when mr sol wears a mask!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2018 7:14:00 AM
Yes!!! That other stuff is way too much strain on the old brain-o!!!

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