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Old Man Winter

Nip my nose! Pound at my core!
I’ll frame a warm blanket ‘round thighs and toes.
Decorate with icicles door-to-door!
My darling and me, nuzzling like eskimos.
Together we can take anything that Winter throws.

Throw a softball of snow my way
and I will merrily call in the snowmen brigade.
They come armed with carrots and stones…olé!
     Dear Winter, who will come to your aid?
                I shiver! I’m afraid!

Forget about that, I’ll take a nice sleigh ride
down a glistening hill,
with my honey-bear by my side.
With speed bumps, it’s quite a thrill.
Please Winter, don’t set out to kill. 

Bitty flakes on my lashes, shoulders; I shake.
My sweetheart will take off my scarf, coat and boots.
So warm by the hearth, we’ll not soon awake.
Before that…we drink cocoa, eat cake with dried fruits.
We will dream of you, Old Man Winter and your pursuits.

12/14/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Have a blessed day...................
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:29 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Gondolf Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:02 AM
Nuzzling with your darling is certainly the best way the survive winter’s chill. Congrats on your placement in the contest, Kim. Hugs, John
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Thank you, John ~ hugs!
Alex Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:41 PM
Great description vividly portrayed. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Roberts Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:07 PM
congrats on your placement in my contest
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, Francine!
Agustin Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:58 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually experience wintry delight in my "winterless" country... though it's cold in our place now. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 7:01 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Beata! :) Thank you!
Laurie Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Hello Kim ... it's all indoor games during the dearth of a shivering winter - thank you Kim - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 8:50 AM
Pretty much!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 8:22 AM
A poem that reminds us of the contrasts we are allowed to experience when we live in a climate with seasons.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 1:12 PM
For sure! Well I’ll be heading to Minnesota soon to see that snow!
Poet Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Wonderful winter imagery expressed in your well-crafted poem, Kim. My kindest wishes.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 1:32 AM
What a cute poem you wrote, Kim. I'm afraid I'll never see snow or build a snowman, but you put me in the mood. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 4:52 AM
Thank you, Victor! :) Hugs ~
Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 8:08 PM
I think that I shall never see a snowball lovely as a tree -- with leaves and shade and grass all round ~ not a trace of white on the ground! ~ Guess who can't wait for the first winter snowstorms!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Love Joyce Kilmer! Trees one of the first poems I remember learning. Throwing a snowball your way. None here in Georgia but headed for Minnesota soon so should find a few there ;)
George   Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 5:05 PM
What a picture you paint with your words, dear Kim. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 4:58 AM
Thank you, Elaine! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 4:27 PM
this one is FANTASTIC. So creatively done, Kim. I bet it scores high!!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 4:58 AM
Thank you, sweet Andrea! :)
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 1:50 PM
what wonderful imagery Kim, i like snow on christmas cards only lol, i especially love the final stanza reminds me of my favourite things song:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 1:51 PM
I love that it reminds you of “My Favourite Thing.” Thank you, Jan! xx
DiMino Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Delightful, beautiful poetry. You get a favorite from me. Thank you for sharing. Joe.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Thank you, Joe!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Hello Kim, A little romance is os nice. To be with the one you love to do all these things. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Hello Kim, you are welcome my friend. Merry Christmas. Darlene
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Thank you, sweet Darlene!
Hankins Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Such beautiful winter images, Kim. Nice writing!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Thank you, Milton! Joy to you and yours!
Leiser Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Ps. You write the English Quintain form is so effortlessly..I’m impressed! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Oh thank you, Laura! I had a good time! I must do it soon again! <3
Leiser Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 10:10 AM
I can picture each poetic scene in your wonderfully descriptive words, Kim! So joyfully penned, too! So enjoyed this! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:51 PM
I really appreciate it!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:46 PM
I really appreciate it!
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