Old Man Winter

top of old smokey
covered with frost - when bow breaks
old man winter blows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 18, 2008 at 5:02 PM
I can see the imagery quite clearly. We are almost ready to make the transition soon. I rather have the summer months. Great job! ~Joseph
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well said Katherine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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September 13, 2008 at 5:33 PM
I like this whimsical write, take care D-nyce
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September 13, 2008 at 8:25 AM
So true. I got a good chuckle out of this one. I'm not looking forward to winter but being in North Dakota one can't avoid it. It was so good to see your name pop up. I hope things are going well for you. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Karen
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