Old Jim

Old Jim was always ready with a smile,
And it became contagious that was just his style.

He never let life get the better of him,
And you could just see it, the love that transported out of those old eyes of Jim.

Jim never got married said it was just to hard to choose,
And he would say, love is sometimes a gamble and it’s to painful when you lose.

But you could tell as Jim grew older that, that was the part of life that he missed most,
He thought he had it all figured out and along towards the end all that was left to do was sit back and coast.

But the walls have a way of closing in and loneliness is a bitter friend,
Especially on those long cold winter nights that seem to never end.

Well spring brought about a different Jim, one who looked haggard and worn,
And that once so impressive smile was now a look of scorn.

Till one Sunday church social old Jim decided to go,
There his life was about to change, there he met the love of his life, her name was Betty Jo.

She said old Jim you don’t impress me much but I sure like your smile,
He said I need you to come and be my bride, for it’s you I’ve needed for such a long, long while.

They were married on that very day, two lonely souls came together as one,
Now his smile is back again, you should see old Jim and his newborn son.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Buys Avatar
August 3, 2008 at 11:30 AM
Made me smile, so sincere and fanciful. If life could only be that simple. Good one, Ron. Love Heidie
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 1, 2008 at 9:16 AM
Happiness in this one. Amazing what a good woman and a child can do to your outlook on life. Vince
Nelson Avatar
August 1, 2008 at 6:41 AM
what a love story. this is what God had in mind when He told us to go forth and procreate. as He sent the animals 2x2, He also sent His children. It made me laugh. love, louise nelson ps I will be writing soon miss you all.
Reynolds Avatar
August 1, 2008 at 4:01 AM
What a beautifully told, happy tale - great message here, and very uplifting - good for Jim!!! Love Kristin
Babcock Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 9:24 PM
I love happy ending but not only that it is two lonely people who found each other. Ain't love grand. God Bless Phyl
Foulk Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 7:33 PM
yes this did have a happy ending. a very beautiful piece of poetry. enjoyed reading this fine poem. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comment
Winter Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 5:36 PM
Aw, I love stories with happy endings. This was a joy to read. Love, Shar
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