Old Image

Old image

1-
One evening,
She was showing me her image.
It was very small and old.
Someday,
We met through Skype.
Also, she offered an old image.

2-
Another year, we met at hotel.
For memory,
She gifts me her picture.
same old image.

3-
For long time,
she was absent.
Suddenly,I lost her voice.

4-
In the evening, full of sadness.
Boldly..
I teared her image.
her old image.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 10/19/2015 6:56:00 PM
Omg! U carry alot of pain and sadness in u my friend ....if u need anything or someone to talk to you can talk to me my friend soup mail me if u want..... But nice poem though....I hope she loved u like u loved her and I hope she still loves u more even than u do ...
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Md Alzhrani
Date: 10/20/2015 4:47:00 AM
Dear Dalia..... thank you for your sweet words. best wishes
Date: 10/16/2015 1:32:00 PM
Your poems contain good amounts of originality, Mohammed. Try reading William Butler Yeats, W H Auden and Lord Byron poems. They contain a mixture of both mythical and romanticism...rather like your own. Best regards! :) john
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Date: 10/16/2015 5:30:00 PM
My friend JOHN, thank you for your advice. Best regards.
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