Old Image

Old image 1- One evening, She was showing me her image. It was very small and old. Someday, We met through Skype. Also, she offered an old image. 2- Another year, we met at hotel. For memory, She gifts me her picture. same old image. 3- For long time, she was absent. Suddenly,I lost her voice. 4- In the evening, full of sadness. Boldly.. I teared her image. her old image.

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/19/2015 6:56:00 PM

Omg! U carry alot of pain and sadness in u my friend ....if u need anything or someone to talk to you can talk to me my friend soup mail me if u want..... But nice poem though....I hope she loved u like u loved her and I hope she still loves u more even than u do ...

Md Alzhrani
Date: 10/20/2015 4:47:00 AM

Dear Dalia..... thank you for your sweet words. best wishes

John Fleming

Date: 10/16/2015 1:32:00 PM

Your poems contain good amounts of originality, Mohammed. Try reading William Butler Yeats, W H Auden and Lord Byron poems. They contain a mixture of both mythical and romanticism...rather like your own. Best regards! :) john

Md Alzhrani
Date: 10/16/2015 5:30:00 PM

My friend JOHN, thank you for your advice. Best regards.