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Old House Tour

" Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering?" - Constance La France.

         dilapidated and weather-beaten,
              looking at this old house
                    from the outside.
         a graffiti artist has paid a visit.
                    there are patches 
        of discolored grass on the lawn
              full of overgrown weeds.
             it's been long abandoned.
      the wind whispers unheard secrets.
          birds nesting in trees nearby 
                     sing to no one.
           some windows, boarded up. 
         backyard window, smashed in.
          the conditions are just about 
               the same on the inside.
          moles galore on the ceilings.
                 raindrops trickle in 
          from apertures on the roof 
                  during cloudburst. 
     some doors creek upon opening.
      the walls have seen better days.
         syringes litter here and there;
   drug addicts have sought refuge here.
        some faucets run brown gunk;
               do not drink the water.

Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 05/28/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 5:26 AM
- A house that has been abandoned for a long time and lives its own life - Congratulations on your win, Edward - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 10:17 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 4:08 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 4:53 AM
Thank you so much, Sara: -)
Alex Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 8:41 PM
Very beautiful and picturesque. Each detail of the abandoned house is very realistic. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)
La France Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 6:54 PM
Edward, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback, congratulations, and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 7:06 AM
I hear the saddened whispers of this old, neglected house. Aptly done for the contest theme.
Ibeh Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 1:10 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback and visit, Vijay:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Very nice, Edward. The houses I’ve lived in or other family have been modernized…would hardly recognize the inside…sometimes even floor plans changed. How sad a former home in dilapidation. God bless!
Ibeh Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Thank you so much for the awesome comments and lovely visit, Kim:-)
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