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" Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering?" - Constance La France. dilapidated and weather-beaten, looking at this old house from the outside. a graffiti artist has paid a visit. there are patches of discolored grass on the lawn full of overgrown weeds. it's been long abandoned. the wind whispers unheard secrets. birds nesting in trees nearby sing to no one. some windows, boarded up. backyard window, smashed in. the conditions are just about the same on the inside. moles galore on the ceilings. raindrops trickle in from apertures on the roof during cloudburst. some doors creek upon opening. the walls have seen better days. syringes litter here and there; drug addicts have sought refuge here. some faucets run brown gunk; do not drink the water. Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 05/28/2023

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Date: 6/6/2023 5:26:00 AM
- A house that has been abandoned for a long time and lives its own life - Congratulations on your win, Edward - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/6/2023 10:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 6/6/2023 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/6/2023 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara: -)
Date: 6/3/2023 8:41:00 PM
Very beautiful and picturesque. Each detail of the abandoned house is very realistic. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/4/2023 6:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 6/3/2023 6:54:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/4/2023 6:05:00 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback, congratulations, and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 5/29/2023 7:06:00 AM
I hear the saddened whispers of this old, neglected house. Aptly done for the contest theme.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/30/2023 1:10:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback and visit, Vijay:-)
Date: 5/29/2023 6:29:00 AM
Very nice, Edward. The houses I’ve lived in or other family have been modernized…would hardly recognize the inside…sometimes even floor plans changed. How sad a former home in dilapidation. God bless!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/30/2023 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for the awesome comments and lovely visit, Kim:-)

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