Old Heart

Most times,
old heart,
you're like 
a sultry walking blues;
48 beats per minute
of Muddy or John Lee
shuffling a twelve bar,
never out of rhythm,
classic, lazy,
drowsy 
old man's beat

boom,boom
boom, boom 

boom, boom
boom, boom 

Old heart, 
your beat's 
sometimes like
a vicious bebop chorus;
Coltrane or Parker
blasting a furious solo
as the notes fly up my
chest like bubbles
rising in water
and popping
through the
surface

Old heart,
I don't mind
your bebop
and I love your blues

But please don't
learn any 
techno

Or we're done 

Y'hear?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Love the analogy David...cheers
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 2:44 PM
Thanks Tim
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 8:38 AM
yes make sure it keeps a steady beat David. great write! Hugs jan xx
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 2:44 PM
Thanks Jan
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