Old Gate

Bright ivy cascades in front of the old gate where evening’s light dim--- 10 Nov 16 One, One Liner Contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2016 7:29:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Leon:-) hugs Jan xx

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 11/12/2016 12:19:00 PM

I love to see good things come to good people. This is one of those times. Congratulations!

Sarita Milliner

Date: 11/12/2016 10:10:00 AM

Nice visual! Make the "old gate" glow! Congratulations!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/11/2016 6:29:00 PM

Hi Leon, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2016 2:41:00 PM

Very descriptive work with the use of a few words..Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/11/2016 11:11:00 AM

super fine, jajosh.. special cheers on your greeat win..huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2016 8:16:00 AM

You present quite an image, Leon, where contrasting shades of light are most noticeable. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Jean Murray

Date: 11/11/2016 6:31:00 AM

Bright poem. Well done on your placement Leon.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2016 8:51:00 PM

Hope amidst the old gate...charming! Congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2016 3:30:00 PM

lovely one liner Leon:-) hugs Jan xx