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There was an old bull frog from Cork Whose friends might've thought him a dork But when flies would swarm in And they all took a swim Old frog used his tongue like a fork. For Limerick Contest 04/11/2018 3rd. Place

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Al Juman

Date: 6/9/2018 1:36:00 AM

Nice but I don't like the word fork at the end but excellent

Charlie Smith
Date: 6/9/2018 2:23:00 PM

Thanks, what would you have written?

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/31/2018 10:31:00 AM

Yikes! That forked tongue has many interpretations! Nice one!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/31/2018 11:36:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Kim...

Carole Duet

Date: 5/28/2018 1:15:00 AM

So clever and cute, Charlie!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/29/2018 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Carole...

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 5/25/2018 12:28:00 PM

Excellent limerick, Charlie! Love the last line, too. Thanks for reading my work. Best to you. / M

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/25/2018 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Maurice.

Joseph May

Date: 5/21/2018 7:43:00 AM

Lol...Nicely done Charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/21/2018 2:39:00 PM

Thank you Joseph...

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/30/2018 6:29:00 AM

Love it to bits, never fail to bring a smile to me..wonderful limerick, Charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/2/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thanks Harry...

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2018 1:45:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/28/2018 9:36:00 AM

Thanks Jan...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/27/2018 8:18:00 AM

Ha ha, this is delightfully cute and entertaining.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/27/2018 9:33:00 AM

Glad you liked it Richard, thanks...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/26/2018 11:43:00 AM

Hi Charlie, a wonderful job on the limerick, gave me the laugh i needed. This limerick does join the others in my faves. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/26/2018 2:00:00 PM

You are very kind Mike, thanks...

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/20/2018 7:09:00 AM

Great job Charlie! You made me laugh when I needed it!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/24/2018 9:22:00 AM

I'm so glad Chuck...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/16/2018 8:41:00 AM

Excellent my friend. I love your limerick. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 2:08:00 PM

Thank you Ravi...

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/14/2018 1:39:00 PM

A good one, Charlie! Congrats on your podium win! Sandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:57:00 PM

Thanks Sandra...

Eve Roper

Date: 4/14/2018 11:00:00 AM

Great funny Limerick,Charlie, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:52:00 PM

Thanks Eve...

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/14/2018 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this funny well-written limerick!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Susan...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2018 5:05:00 PM

Glad to see you got a GREAT win, Charlie. Congrats to you

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/13/2018 3:31:00 PM

Very good Charlie. It is entertaining to watch them waiting in anticipation of their next meal. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Connie...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/13/2018 3:28:00 PM

Ha ha! Love it Charlie :) xomo!

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 4/13/2018 3:08:00 PM

Charlle, I love great lims and this is a GREAT one! Congrats on your win and thx for your kind remarks re my win. Great to hear from you - Bob

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:39:00 PM

Thank you Robert...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2018 2:47:00 PM

This is one of my personal faves, Charlie. Congratulations on your win!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:36:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn...

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2018 2:39:00 PM

This is both witty and creative, Charlie. Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:34:00 PM

Thank you Paul...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/13/2018 1:10:00 PM

Love it, Charlie! Congrats on your win. Janice

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Janice...

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2018 12:16:00 PM

I will never look at a frog again in the same way!!! Hope he used a napkin !!! This was adorable, Charlie !! Congrats to you !!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:20:00 PM

Thank you Carrie...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2018 8:18:00 AM

Congrats, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/13/2018 12:00:00 PM

Thank you Kim...

Maria Williams

Date: 4/13/2018 7:06:00 AM

A fun limerick Charlie, looks like he put his forked tongue to good use, lol. Good luck in the contest....Maria :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/13/2018 12:00:00 PM

Thank you Maria...

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/13/2018 5:06:00 AM

That dorky old frog has a forked tongue...in some places, he may have one pointed at him lol...congrats! on your placement my friend...^WW^

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/13/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thank you WW...