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Old Frog

There was an old bull frog from Cork
Whose friends might've thought him a dork
But when flies would swarm in
And they all took a swim
Old frog used his tongue like a fork.


For Limerick Contest
04/11/2018
3rd. Place

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Al Juman June 9, 2018 at 1:36 AM Nice but I don't like the word fork at the end but excellent Charlie Smith June 9, 2018 at 2:23 PM Thanks, what would you have written?

Kim Rodrigues May 31, 2018 at 10:31 AM Yikes! That forked tongue has many interpretations! Nice one! Charlie Smith May 31, 2018 at 11:36 AM Thanks for the visit Kim...

Carole Duet May 28, 2018 at 1:15 AM So clever and cute, Charlie!! Charlie Smith May 29, 2018 at 12:18 PM Thanks Carole...

Maurice Rigoler May 25, 2018 at 12:28 PM Excellent limerick, Charlie! Love the last line, too. Thanks for reading my work. Best to you. / M Charlie Smith May 25, 2018 at 2:31 PM Thank you Maurice.

Joseph May May 21, 2018 at 7:43 AM Lol...Nicely done Charlie Charlie Smith May 21, 2018 at 2:39 PM Thank you Joseph...

Harry Horsman April 30, 2018 at 6:29 AM Love it to bits, never fail to bring a smile to me..wonderful limerick, Charlie Charlie Smith May 2, 2018 at 10:39 AM Thanks Harry...

Jan Allison April 27, 2018 at 1:45 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Charlie Smith April 28, 2018 at 9:36 AM Thanks Jan...

Richard Lamoureux April 27, 2018 at 8:18 AM Ha ha, this is delightfully cute and entertaining. Charlie Smith April 27, 2018 at 9:33 AM Glad you liked it Richard, thanks...

Vladislav Raven April 26, 2018 at 11:43 AM Hi Charlie, a wonderful job on the limerick, gave me the laugh i needed. This limerick does join the others in my faves. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Charlie Smith April 26, 2018 at 2:00 PM You are very kind Mike, thanks...

Chuck Melugin April 20, 2018 at 7:09 AM Great job Charlie! You made me laugh when I needed it! Charlie Smith April 24, 2018 at 9:22 AM I'm so glad Chuck...

Ravi Sathasivam April 16, 2018 at 8:41 AM Excellent my friend. I love your limerick. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish. Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 2:08 PM Thank you Ravi...

Sandra Haight April 14, 2018 at 1:39 PM A good one, Charlie! Congrats on your podium win! Sandra Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:57 PM Thanks Sandra...

Eve Roper April 14, 2018 at 11:00 AM Great funny Limerick,Charlie, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:52 PM Thanks Eve...

Susan Gentry April 14, 2018 at 9:48 AM Congratulations on your win with this funny well-written limerick! Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:47 PM Thank you Susan...

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2018 at 5:05 PM Glad to see you got a GREAT win, Charlie. Congrats to you Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:43 PM Thank you Andrea...

Connie Marcum Wong April 13, 2018 at 3:31 PM Very good Charlie. It is entertaining to watch them waiting in anticipation of their next meal. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:43 PM Thank you Connie...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 13, 2018 at 3:28 PM Ha ha! Love it Charlie :) xomo!

Robert L. Hinshaw April 13, 2018 at 3:08 PM Charlle, I love great lims and this is a GREAT one! Congrats on your win and thx for your kind remarks re my win. Great to hear from you - Bob Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:39 PM Thank you Robert...

Carolyn Devonshire April 13, 2018 at 2:47 PM This is one of my personal faves, Charlie. Congratulations on your win! Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:36 PM Thank you Carolyn...

Paul Callus April 13, 2018 at 2:39 PM This is both witty and creative, Charlie. Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:34 PM Thank you Paul...

Janice Canerdy April 13, 2018 at 1:10 PM Love it, Charlie! Congrats on your win. Janice Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:25 PM Thanks Janice...

Carrie Richards April 13, 2018 at 12:16 PM I will never look at a frog again in the same way!!! Hope he used a napkin !!! This was adorable, Charlie !! Congrats to you !! Charlie Smith April 16, 2018 at 1:20 PM Thank you Carrie...

Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2018 at 8:18 AM Congrats, Charlie! Charlie Smith April 13, 2018 at 12:00 PM Thank you Kim...

Maria Williams April 13, 2018 at 7:06 AM A fun limerick Charlie, looks like he put his forked tongue to good use, lol. Good luck in the contest....Maria :) Charlie Smith April 13, 2018 at 12:00 PM Thank you Maria...

Winged Warrior April 13, 2018 at 5:06 AM That dorky old frog has a forked tongue...in some places, he may have one pointed at him lol...congrats! on your placement my friend...^WW^ Charlie Smith April 13, 2018 at 11:59 AM Thank you WW...

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