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Old Frog

There was an old bull frog from Cork
Whose friends might've thought him a dork
But when flies would swarm in
And they all took a swim
Old frog used his tongue like a fork.


For Limerick Contest
04/11/2018
3rd. Place

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Al Juman Date: 6/9/2018 1:36:00 AM Nice but I don't like the word fork at the end but excellent Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/9/2018 2:23:00 PM Thanks, what would you have written?

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/31/2018 10:31:00 AM Yikes! That forked tongue has many interpretations! Nice one! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 5/31/2018 11:36:00 AM Thanks for the visit Kim...

Carole Duet Date: 5/28/2018 1:15:00 AM So clever and cute, Charlie!! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 5/29/2018 12:18:00 PM Thanks Carole...

Maurice Rigoler Date: 5/25/2018 12:28:00 PM Excellent limerick, Charlie! Love the last line, too. Thanks for reading my work. Best to you. / M Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 5/25/2018 2:31:00 PM Thank you Maurice.

Joseph May Date: 5/21/2018 7:43:00 AM Lol...Nicely done Charlie Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 5/21/2018 2:39:00 PM Thank you Joseph...

Harry Horsman Date: 4/30/2018 6:29:00 AM Love it to bits, never fail to bring a smile to me..wonderful limerick, Charlie Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 5/2/2018 10:39:00 AM Thanks Harry...

Jan Allison Date: 4/27/2018 1:45:00 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/28/2018 9:36:00 AM Thanks Jan...

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/27/2018 8:18:00 AM Ha ha, this is delightfully cute and entertaining. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/27/2018 9:33:00 AM Glad you liked it Richard, thanks...

Vladislav Raven Date: 4/26/2018 11:43:00 AM Hi Charlie, a wonderful job on the limerick, gave me the laugh i needed. This limerick does join the others in my faves. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/26/2018 2:00:00 PM You are very kind Mike, thanks...

Chuck Melugin Date: 4/20/2018 7:09:00 AM Great job Charlie! You made me laugh when I needed it! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/24/2018 9:22:00 AM I'm so glad Chuck...

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/16/2018 8:41:00 AM Excellent my friend. I love your limerick. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 2:08:00 PM Thank you Ravi...

Sandra Haight Date: 4/14/2018 1:39:00 PM A good one, Charlie! Congrats on your podium win! Sandra Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:57:00 PM Thanks Sandra...

Eve Roper Date: 4/14/2018 11:00:00 AM Great funny Limerick,Charlie, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:52:00 PM Thanks Eve...

Susan Gentry Date: 4/14/2018 9:48:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this funny well-written limerick! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:47:00 PM Thank you Susan...

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/13/2018 5:05:00 PM Glad to see you got a GREAT win, Charlie. Congrats to you Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:43:00 PM Thank you Andrea...

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/13/2018 3:31:00 PM Very good Charlie. It is entertaining to watch them waiting in anticipation of their next meal. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:43:00 PM Thank you Connie...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/13/2018 3:28:00 PM Ha ha! Love it Charlie :) xomo! Login to Reply

Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 4/13/2018 3:08:00 PM Charlle, I love great lims and this is a GREAT one! Congrats on your win and thx for your kind remarks re my win. Great to hear from you - Bob Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:39:00 PM Thank you Robert...

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/13/2018 2:47:00 PM This is one of my personal faves, Charlie. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:36:00 PM Thank you Carolyn...

Paul Callus Date: 4/13/2018 2:39:00 PM This is both witty and creative, Charlie. Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:34:00 PM Thank you Paul...

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/13/2018 1:10:00 PM Love it, Charlie! Congrats on your win. Janice Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:25:00 PM Thanks Janice...

Carrie Richards Date: 4/13/2018 12:16:00 PM I will never look at a frog again in the same way!!! Hope he used a napkin !!! This was adorable, Charlie !! Congrats to you !! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/16/2018 1:20:00 PM Thank you Carrie...

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/13/2018 8:18:00 AM Congrats, Charlie! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/13/2018 12:00:00 PM Thank you Kim...

Maria Williams Date: 4/13/2018 7:06:00 AM A fun limerick Charlie, looks like he put his forked tongue to good use, lol. Good luck in the contest....Maria :) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/13/2018 12:00:00 PM Thank you Maria...

Winged Warrior Date: 4/13/2018 5:06:00 AM That dorky old frog has a forked tongue...in some places, he may have one pointed at him lol...congrats! on your placement my friend...^WW^ Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/13/2018 11:59:00 AM Thank you WW...

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