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Old Flames

They called her the Fire Woman for wherever there was fire she was there In the Fall when all the brush needed clearing in Spring when everything else needed to be burned she showed up, smiling beguiling flames to her beck and call Her tall, brown-skinned frame 'though lean and weathered and stooped a bit was still powerful and somewhat imposing- not so much in her physical presence as in her demeanor and the silent sparkle in her amber eyes as if embers from the flames were in her spirit and fire itself was in her soul She was old no one knew her exact age or much about her except that she loved to play with fire and it fell and rose to her every whim No one could lay claim to controlling fire but her... and then him- A strange romance between the Fireman and the Fire Woman began a love that revolved and flickered around their common passion for flames one who started fires and one who put them out without a doubt it was intense heat that drew them together But unlike young lovers who easily get burned they were slow and steady patiently tending their home fires taking care to control and manage the blaze to gently keep it going, and not let it get too cool or too hot, but just right for a brisk, chilly night Two old flames burning toward the end of life keeping each other from the cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/25/2018 5:49:00 PM
wow, I really love this one, Rhona. What great story telling. FAVE
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/26/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thank you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, my friend! ;)
Date: 11/24/2018 4:08:00 PM
So vibrant and powerful, love the last stanza!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/24/2018 9:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle! ;)
Date: 11/21/2018 3:06:00 PM
Is that why Dolly Parton sang, "Old flames can't hold a candle to you?" Aloha! Rico
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/21/2018 6:51:00 PM
Hahahaha! ;D Thanks for the funny comment, Rico! Aloha!
Date: 11/21/2018 6:55:00 AM
What are you doing up so early my friend? Writing the BEST poem. You know how much this appealed to my pyromaniac self! "She was old no one knew her exact age or much about her except that she loved to play with fire and it fell and rose to her every whim" I love it that I misread fireman the first time and thought of it as FIREman not fireman. Hahaha what a delight; loved the pun, and the play on words. This one delighted me, and of course, Trixie.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/21/2018 7:13:00 AM
I'm back on my very weird schedule again... This one has been in the back of my mind for a time, & I had a feeling you would love it! Your comments always make my day!! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2018 6:56:00 AM
Went to my FAV list immediately, if not sooner.

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