Old Flame

Fire rekindle as the old ashes are still burning The flame in ones soul ignites The soul awakens as there is a new yearning In your own world was born a new light Overflowing passion with ones mind interacting All your thoughts and memories seemingly far away The past experiences present counteracting The love, your love wishes to keep it at bay Remaining focused and still yet no resolve Tighten your grip on your own reality The mixture of your absurd fantasies dissolved Free yourself from this passion insanity Wherever you go, you always here their name That spark, a small spark which was your old flame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Kendal, Congratulations on your amazing poem being featured. Excellent write!
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Kendal. Love,Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:32 PM
A very nicely written work with some good rhyming included. Check your next to last line: you should have "hear" instead of "here" in that line.
Hackett Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Beautiful words, I enjoyed your poem.
Pyfrom Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Carol, Destroyer Poet, Linda, and Sara. I truly appreciate your comments and I do feel welcome and excited to be a part of a community such as this.
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:33 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup K. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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August 19, 2010 at 8:51 PM
Very enjoyable read,, nice write..P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more ..with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 10:17 AM
To ignite the old soaking wet rotten wood that has just been abandoned in the rain would be scientific wonder..How? Great thought provoker..Sara
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