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Old Flame

Fire rekindle as the old ashes are still burning The flame in ones soul ignites The soul awakens as there is a new yearning In your own world was born a new light Overflowing passion with ones mind interacting All your thoughts and memories seemingly far away The past experiences present counteracting The love, your love wishes to keep it at bay Remaining focused and still yet no resolve Tighten your grip on your own reality The mixture of your absurd fantasies dissolved Free yourself from this passion insanity Wherever you go, you always here their name That spark, a small spark which was your old flame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2012 2:16:00 PM
Kendal, Congratulations on your amazing poem being featured. Excellent write!
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Date: 3/22/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Kendal. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:32:00 PM
A very nicely written work with some good rhyming included. Check your next to last line: you should have "hear" instead of "here" in that line.
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Date: 9/4/2010 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful words, I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Carol, Destroyer Poet, Linda, and Sara. I truly appreciate your comments and I do feel welcome and excited to be a part of a community such as this.
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Date: 8/20/2010 4:33:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup K. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 8:51:00 PM
Very enjoyable read,, nice write..P.D.
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Date: 8/19/2010 11:21:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more ..with luv..
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:17:00 AM
To ignite the old soaking wet rotten wood that has just been abandoned in the rain would be scientific wonder..How? Great thought provoker..Sara
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