Old Fashion Summer

Here under these leaves
of the lush gardens and weeds
Grape vines crawl from post to post 
that create a resting spot for most
 
And now the robin is
guarding her young chicks so fair
her nest is made of grasses and hair
 
Trickling streams of a watery theme 
Where dragonflies hover and spread their wings 
And the so clever songs the robin sings
 
For summer comes and brings the heat of the day 
Where busy children are out to play
Oh treasure this, theses days that come to pass 
Where one may sit and drink a glass
 
With lemonade and roller-skates
 be home before
 dark ,or at least by eight
 
Laboring were the long nights of summer 
Were perspiration was a part of slumber 
And so we woke with sticky necks and sheets 
because all we had was a fan to beat the heat

And reminisce theses days we remember 
Its soon back to school 
Were we could’t wait until late September
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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June 13, 2008 at 4:37 PM
Hi Laura, do I ever remember the summmertime great write, and great memories of my own, as a matter of fact I just did a poem called summertime, you might enjoy it, take care D-nyce
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June 13, 2008 at 4:34 AM
The details of the grape vines and the robin's nest make this poem come alive.
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June 12, 2008 at 11:31 AM
Laura, this truly is so reminiscent of the days of my youth, being out late, lemonade, all of it. Great visuals and the flow is so gentle and smooth. Excellent write. Michael
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June 12, 2008 at 5:12 AM
A beautiful, nostalgic write Laura. Brought me back to the happy summer days of childhood. Love, Shar
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June 11, 2008 at 9:27 AM
In spite of the hardships, they were better days. We do have the memories to cling to. God Bless. Vince
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June 11, 2008 at 3:18 AM
We are having one of those here, right now! It is so so so HOT! Fans blowing all around. A lovely summer poem. Many blessings, Kristin
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June 11, 2008 at 12:26 AM
Such memories'With lemonade and roller-skates'excellent Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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June 10, 2008 at 4:56 PM
Hi Laura Oh hun what a beautiful picture you paint of an "Old fashion summer"! I got such a peaceful serene feeling as I was reading this...Truly enjoyed. Your images and words flow like magic.Just lovely. Your friend Love Light Truth Patricia PS Thanks to Laura for your support and wonderful comments to my writing. We all need that right! Smile...
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