Old Couple

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I said something that my husband did not like..He squared off to fight and I did too..We both could not keep a straight face..Sara
old couple square off to fight.. humor rolls wins bout

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Date: 6/16/2012 11:16:00 AM
Good Senryu.A soupmail has been sent to you Sara.
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Date: 3/5/2012 2:40:00 PM
Yes! Humor should win every fight. The world would be so much better off. Good one!
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Date: 3/4/2012 9:27:00 PM
enjoyed humor has a nice calming effect....
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Date: 3/4/2012 6:06:00 AM
good write without a doubt,, fun to read Sara,,
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Date: 3/3/2012 10:30:00 PM
a cute little one. Humor should always win out!!
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:16:00 PM
Sara,,, enjoyed~have a nice one ;-)* PD
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Date: 3/2/2012 2:08:00 PM
Well done Sara - Smile...and the world will smile back to you.Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/2/2012 12:56:00 PM
This is a very sweet write about how laughter can heal many things! And to top it off it with an old couple...that can be extremely cute to see! At least the old couple didn't fight and that they found humor, in maybe the situation or in something at which they found humor! This is a wonderful poem that I have read this afternoon! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:25:00 AM
i like this sara.. laughter can heal any tiff!.. well done.. hope all is fine including our baby poet! :) huggs!
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:30:00 AM
a sweet write Sara.. can just see this visual playing out .. old couples are so fun .. so much experience from them is learned.. luv..
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Date: 3/2/2012 7:53:00 AM
Sara, just love the idea of this one, I can see them now... we have Lavender fields growing close to our home when they are in full bloom it is a magnificent sight, just like a Van Gogh painting...David
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