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"Old buildings inspire my poetic soul, and touch my heart forever." Quote by _Constance Love the old heritage buildings in the downtown of my city, and how architects have let old mingle with modern; oh, to demolish a beautiful heritage building is a pity ! Yes, I adorn an old building that has been long trodden, by many people from hundreds of years ago; in awe I walk on floors where their footsteps have fallen ! Closing my eyes I imagine their spirits still dwell and flow, and the turrets and moulding details of each inspire me; one was a jail with bodies of those hung- buried below ! I feel this concern for each old structure and ancient tree, also some old grand homes are neglected and falling down; like sad sinking ships in a vast grey sea of concrete ! Oh, I want to save every decaying house that is rundown; before these once lovely old homes just tumble-down ! _________________ July 14, 2022 Poetry/Terza Rima/Old, But Still Lovely Copyright Protected, ID 07-1473-640-14 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Five Stanza Terza Rima sponsor, L MILTON HANKINS, Judged 08/02/2022

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Date: 7/15/2022 7:38:00 AM
I enjoy your entry for this contest, Constance. Well written Terza Rima. My wife, Sara, wrote a novel on the spirits, treasures and secrets in the places you describe in this poem. Your poem would have been nice in the introduction. I also liked you quote. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2022 6:20:00 PM
Bill, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and quote, I have always loved old buildings and homes, so your wife is a writer also that is so nice, blessings and smiles ~Constance
Date: 7/14/2022 7:05:00 PM
People are so concerned with appearances, but walk into any musuem or antique store and be amazed at what people find beautiful! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 7/14/2022 7:40:00 PM
Rico, thank you so much for the visit and comment, appreciate, blessings ~Constance

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