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Old Bones

With age come aches and pains and, too, A stiffening of joints With movements thus restricted On the body’s weakest points. So hips and neck and hamstrings And especially the knees Announce that they’re eroding As they tighten up and seize. Though exercise and heating pads May help you to regroup, Those old bones might be better off To make a base for soup!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/21/2020 5:56:00 PM
Loved the laugh I got at the punchline Ilene. I also liked the word "too" at the end of the first line. Great style all through. Keep on keepin on. Trevor
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Date: 10/17/2020 6:51:00 PM
My old bones probably would be best as a soup base -- plenty of meat and fat on them! lol. Cute one, ilene!
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Date: 10/17/2020 5:35:00 PM
I am loving the ending and all the rest of this poem Ilene.
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Date: 10/17/2020 2:24:00 PM
:))) ... I already feel the winter on my bones, Ilene :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2020 1:57:00 PM
Haha so true is your verse Ilene, rather they waited till i was gone before they use them for soup. Im all for recycling though. Tom
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Date: 10/17/2020 12:31:00 PM
At least in Hawai'i we don't need to worry about FREEZING in place! Take care! Aloha! Rico
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