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Old Birthday Blues Collaboration With Sandra Weiss

There was a lady with old birthday blues Another year passed, with gray hues So she ran out on the beach seeking a starfish to reach ending up on a cruise in the news! Heidi Sands 2/24/22 Sequel added by: Sandra Weiss The lady with birthday blues who went off on the passing cruise She fell off the boat much too old to float lost at sea, making the news! Sandra Weiss 2/26/22 Suddenly there was chaos at the sea from loss of poems when the muse chose to flee The birthday lady is a poet Many people know it So, the cruise turned around quickly! Heidi Sands 2/26/22 The old lady tried to write a great poem that was just right But, muse was not there with talent to share So, she disappeared from sight! Sandra Weiss 2/26/22 All of a sudden there was a kaboom! A tidal wave flooded her cruise bedroom Poems flew all over the place She surfaced with muse in place Birthday wishes granted, no more gloom! Heidi Sands 2/26/22

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Date: 2/26/2022 5:35:00 AM
Grey hues do bring on the blues, but thank goodness a hairdresser is always nearby! Hope you are well my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2022 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. All is well. I hope you are doing well too :)
Date: 2/26/2022 3:12:00 AM
I do wonder how it could end. I enjoyed reading this creative work with questions at the end. Like how old is she? Why a starfish? Or was it a real star she was seeking? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2022 3:45:00 AM
Good questions Sara. Thank you for your input. I hope you have a nice day. You are welcome :)
Date: 2/25/2022 11:04:00 AM
Ending up on a cruise in the news…hopefully for good reasons!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2022 11:11:00 AM
Yes , all good and funny reasons. Thanks Kim :)
Date: 2/25/2022 10:36:00 AM
Hi Heidi,come and join in the limerick thread in the "Poetry Forum".
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2022 11:10:00 AM
Oh? I don't know where that is. I hardly ever do Limerick. I am not good at them lol Thanks. Will try to see. :)
Date: 2/25/2022 7:27:00 AM
Glad that you posted it! Receiving kudos for the " cruise in the news" leaves one to wonder... Of course,I love it! A fave!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Sandy . Happy to hear you love it and saving it as a Fave, for you :)
Date: 2/25/2022 3:57:00 AM
I hope the " Cruise in the news" doesn't mean that she went overboard!! good one Heidi! Happy Friday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2022 5:36:00 AM
Hi Mike. It is up to the imagination, but maybe let's say , not overboard. Lol ..unless fully protected.? Happy Friday :) xxoo
Date: 2/24/2022 10:20:00 PM
Very well done, Heidi. I am a weird one, birthday is very important to me. Blessings my friend
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2022 5:34:00 AM
That isn't weird Eve. Thank you. Blessings :)
Date: 2/24/2022 4:01:00 PM
I see her running her to the beach. Enjoyed the humor.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2022 5:17:00 PM
Lol. Thank you Vijay. Nice to hear you enjoyed it :)
Date: 2/24/2022 3:59:00 PM
Heidi, I enjoyed your limerick. Loved the last line. "cruise in the news." Thanks for the smile. Blessings ~ Debra
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2022 5:16:00 PM
Thank you and you are welcome. Blessings :)
Date: 2/24/2022 3:22:00 PM
Love your ending in this clever Limerick Heidi. It paints a vivid picture of her circumstances. Blessings xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2022 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I am happy you like it. I hope all is well :)

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