Old Barns and Memories

*for That Old Red Barn contest sponsored by Rick Parise

They sat on the creaky old porch swing
Looking across their dried up fields

He was remembering a favorite tune
Sang it sweetly into her good ear

She flashed a smile into his eyes
Gazed at their barn still standing proud

"Oh Pa" she whispered,"do you recall
When we met at that barn dance long ago?"

He grinned at her the way he did
And thought about that sweet young gal

As they danced the lovely night away
In that big old barn on down the road

Now memories are all that's left to them
But they're built strong like those old red barns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:32 AM
A most deserving win in Rick's conest with this delightful poem Deb >> James :)
Roberts Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 7:11 PM
lovely piece, congrats on your win in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 4:41 PM
wow, Deb,I'm so glad I chose to see the winners' list tonight and check out this sweet poem about two old old lovers!! VERy nice. LUv, Andrea and congratulations
Freeman Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 9:38 AM
They sat on the creaky old porch swing Looking across their dried up fields. Congratulations Deb on your worthy poem's honor. I remember one or two of those old pourch swings, Myself smile! Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Congrats Deb on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. enjoy your top spot and sweet success with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contetst of Red Barn
Horsman Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 11:24 PM
love this Deb, congrats on your win in the contest. Harry
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December 10, 2010 at 11:21 PM
Very touching poem filled with joyful memories for this couple, Deb. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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