Oktoberfest

OKTOBERFEST

Wielding the power of the hefty beer stein,
Energized with viking-like biceps,

We lift the suds in veneration 
In front of our patriotic hearts.
Lively band plays Ein Prosit,
Lips coordinate, resounding louder and louder.

Parade of dirndls and lederhosen -
Amorous couples enjoying Bavarian dance,
Resplendent in reddened faces -
Tapping, turning, with joyful
Yearning, as the oak and maple

Leaves change their costumes, and
Interrupt the Summer’s warmth.
Kamikaze arms tire, dropping their steins, while
Everyone laughs and cheers.

Tables set for a feast of Black Forest
Hams, Potato pancakes, creamy sauerkraut.
Empty stomachs applaud, then quake at the sight of
Rouladin, a savory favorite of flattened beef
Elegantly rolled up with bacon, vegetables, and
Sumptuous pickles. Tantalized tongues ooh and ahh.

None will be left, yet the festival lasts, supplying us with
October’s sensate salted pretzels, a mouth-watering

Treat.  Need to down another beer
Or two or three…I’ve lost count!
Memories made on this chilly day,
Ornaments of cuckoo clocks and steins bought for
Remembrance will be hung from December firs.
Robotic we stare, eyes and ears filled with sights and sounds:
Oktoberfest is in the air and,
We’ll party like there’s no tomorrow!

10/13/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Great going Kim, congratulations. In my part of the world it's Octoberfiesta...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Thank you, Charlie and Happy Fiesta :)
Roper Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Julia's contest. Beautiful imagery :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, Eve!
La France Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem ~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, Constance :)
Selfa Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:15 PM
It's just one word, but it sums up what I want to express. Congratulations Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Thank you! :)
Milliner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Great write Kim, congratulations on your placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Sarita!
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November 12, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Sarita!
Kimathi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 3:43 AM
Congrats Kim, for your well, deserved top placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Back to congratulate you, Kim, on your Second Place podium win! I knew this would be a top winners! Great job! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! XO
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Congrats Kim on your acrostic win. It flows and reads so smoothly.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Thank you, Rick!
Bose Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:43 AM
A quick immersion in Bavaria, Kim. You bring the sights, sounds, and tastes alive--too early for bier now, but I'll be sure to toast your talent later! Nicely done. Thanks, Dave
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Thank you, Dave!
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:30 PM
This is amazing, Kim! Your Acrostic reads so smoothly and is so full of imagery about the fest and the 'wild' times the visitors are having. A top winner for sure! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs :)
Turner Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:13 AM
This is fantastic, Kim. A very intelligent and entertaining acrostic. Reads like a winner to me!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Green Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Perfect Kim, I tried writing to this contest but couldn't do it. But you could and this is an amazing acrostic. I love this work of art. Bravo!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
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