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Oktoberfest

OKTOBERFEST Wielding the power of the hefty beer stein, Energized with viking-like biceps, We lift the suds in veneration In front of our patriotic hearts. Lively band plays Ein Prosit, Lips coordinate, resounding louder and louder. Parade of dirndls and lederhosen - Amorous couples enjoying Bavarian dance, Resplendent in reddened faces - Tapping, turning, with joyful Yearning, as the oak and maple Leaves change their costumes, and Interrupt the Summer’s warmth. Kamikaze arms tire, dropping their steins, while Everyone laughs and cheers. Tables set for a feast of Black Forest Hams, Potato pancakes, creamy sauerkraut. Empty stomachs applaud, then quake at the sight of Rouladin, a savory favorite of flattened beef Elegantly rolled up with bacon, vegetables, and Sumptuous pickles. Tantalized tongues ooh and ahh. None will be left, yet the festival lasts, supplying us with October’s sensate salted pretzels, a mouth-watering Treat. Need to down another beer Or two or three…I’ve lost count! Memories made on this chilly day, Ornaments of cuckoo clocks and steins bought for Remembrance will be hung from December firs. Robotic we stare, eyes and ears filled with sights and sounds: Oktoberfest is in the air and, We’ll party like there’s no tomorrow! 10/13/2016

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Date: 11/14/2016 11:43:00 AM
Great going Kim, congratulations. In my part of the world it's Octoberfiesta...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2016 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie and Happy Fiesta :)
Date: 11/13/2016 6:20:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Julia's contest. Beautiful imagery :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 11/12/2016 7:46:00 PM
Kim congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Constance :)
Date: 11/12/2016 12:15:00 PM
It's just one word, but it sums up what I want to express. Congratulations Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 11/12/2016 9:48:00 AM
Great write Kim, congratulations on your placement!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Sarita!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Sarita!
Date: 11/12/2016 3:43:00 AM
Congrats Kim, for your well, deserved top placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Date: 11/11/2016 4:04:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Kim, on your Second Place podium win! I knew this would be a top winners! Great job! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! XO
Date: 11/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
Congrats Kim on your acrostic win. It flows and reads so smoothly.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thank you, Rick!
Date: 11/11/2016 7:43:00 AM
A quick immersion in Bavaria, Kim. You bring the sights, sounds, and tastes alive--too early for bier now, but I'll be sure to toast your talent later! Nicely done. Thanks, Dave
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thank you, Dave!
Date: 10/13/2016 4:30:00 PM
This is amazing, Kim! Your Acrostic reads so smoothly and is so full of imagery about the fest and the 'wild' times the visitors are having. A top winner for sure! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs :)
Date: 10/13/2016 11:13:00 AM
This is fantastic, Kim. A very intelligent and entertaining acrostic. Reads like a winner to me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Date: 10/13/2016 8:34:00 AM
Perfect Kim, I tried writing to this contest but couldn't do it. But you could and this is an amazing acrostic. I love this work of art. Bravo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2016 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)

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