Ojo Caliente

Where the chug of boiling water pumps
and spills its acids, oxides,
to dye the ice-slabbed hillside orange-red
desert colors, we loll naked in a pool
 lulled half-asleep; first drugged in a broth
of minerals shot from the earth´s core,
then dragged down to a nether place
where the chill of air is salt, sunwarmth, sugar,
until what is known is only what is sensed:
far down below there´s no stations
of the seasons, no days passing, only this
thrashing deeper, coupling, uncoupling
in unsunned wetness where all beginnings are.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 6:54 AM
Douglas - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 12, 2008 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:33 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 11:30 PM
Douglas - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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September 2, 2008 at 7:18 AM
Congratulations Douglas on the featuring of your poem "Ojo Caliente." Vince
Jordan Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 7:53 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week - Sounds like a special place - God Bless
Winter Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations Douglas on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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