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Oinker At the Dessert Bar

Oh, give me cake with double chocolate
And strawberry with sweetened cream whipped stiff.
And if you have a cake named butter nut,
I’ll have that too. For just a little whiff
of carrot cake with pineapple thrown in,
I’ll go bananas!  Come to think of it,
I might as well go all out in my sin
and also order a banana split!
Each scoop of ice cream different I will take -
one scoop of toffee flavor, one of mint,
and walnut too with slices of my cake!
Let cherries, butterscotch, and caramel drop
onto it all until I say to stop!

written Oct. 25, 2015
For the All This Melts in Your Mouth Poetry Contest of Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/12/2015 3:23:00 PM
Loving the title to match the content so well, so many things to take in my taste buds going mad haha, well done!
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sweet delight Andrea!
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Date: 11/2/2015 5:42:00 PM
Crikey Andrea... you haven't half got a sweet tooth have you. Sort of grinning at your poem and wincing at the thought of so much dessert to get through - Lindsay
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:45:00 PM
Gained 5 pounds just reading this. Great write Andrea.
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:26:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome yummy write Andrea!
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Date: 11/1/2015 8:09:00 PM
Andie, first glance of the title definitely give both of us smiles while judging, and this visible as I read your lines as you creatively enumerated lots of desserts which are luscious of tastes!!! hehehe!! it's cute! love it!!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~ Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/1/2015 5:31:00 PM
Good choices of goodies--in a well-written poem. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 11/1/2015 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea!!!!!!
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Date: 11/1/2015 3:32:00 PM
Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2015 2:56:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations. SKAT
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Date: 11/1/2015 12:37:00 PM
Wonderful write, Andrea, congratulations on your win! I have a wonderful gooy recipe for carrot cake with cream cheese frosting that is delightful that you'll want more. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:34:00 AM
Extremely tempting imagery! Congrats on your win. Sandra
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:03:00 AM
Congrats Andrea! A delicious win!
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Date: 11/1/2015 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. If your weakness for those sweets make you an oinker... so am I.
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Date: 10/31/2015 4:58:00 PM
You tempt me to sin, Andrea! But I must be firm and have just one little helping. I think Olive is going to like this one:) // paul
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Date: 10/28/2015 10:59:00 PM
Yum! I think I had an overload just by reading this Andie. Enjoyed this light sonnet. Hugs!
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Date: 10/28/2015 6:48:00 PM
A sonnet, you know I just had to read it. I did not enter this contest and perhaps should have but been very busy on other projects here and elsewhere. Great sonnet , should do very well methinks. A7
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:50:00 PM
Must be being on a diet that brought this tempting delicious poem out in you.
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:34:00 PM
A very delicious and entertaining write Andrea! Buen trabajo!
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Date: 10/28/2015 11:25:00 AM
Very creative and imaginative. Yuuuumy! Lots of stuff to melt as you eat. Good luck in the contest. R.P.
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Date: 10/28/2015 10:43:00 AM
Ooooooh!! How tempting!! All the best in the contest, dear Andrea!! :D :D
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Date: 10/28/2015 1:03:00 AM
Sounds like my kind of ice cream sunday :) Yes I would rather tell you the poems you haven't read. So you don't have to look for them. Cuz I don't like searching at times myself :) Loyalty is another one I don't see your name on :)
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:43:00 AM
Excellent and well penned. It is a great diet to follow up. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/27/2015 10:04:00 PM
That was delicious! I could go for another verse -- something with dark chocolate, cashews, and peanut butter . . . 7
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Date: 10/27/2015 8:00:00 PM
It's like a vivid dream lol, your imagery is so powerful I can taste all of those from here! Good luck in the contest:)
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