oil-on-canvas portrait

to become a masterpiece
it starts with c lu t te red
c
  h
   a
        o 
     t
       i
      c    sketches
paint-splattered smudges
bleeding blotted lines
failed impasto
in fractured form

but eventually,
the canvas begins to glow
through wet brushes,
drop and lift
subtle shifts
of calm chiaroscuro

bold, breathing bursts of colours

layer upon luminous layer
pigment pressed with patient precision
each stroke of  calm caresses 
until the vibrant hues
 that softly  kiss 
 the quiet
quivering glow
of your smile
are finally framed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 3:40 PM
creative structure to your poem with engaging words. wishing you well
Anaya Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 2:53 PM
This is so creative, you've expressed what painting is in a way that would resonate with everyone who's ever painted & with such clever words & word pairings & alliteration! Congratulations on your win, JCB! Blessings
Brul Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:41 PM
Thank you Anaya. You're a gem ^___^
Gasun Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 1:57 PM
A very creative word-paint and poem my dear poet friend JCB. Splendid poet's & artist's work in one. I love this a lot & enjoyed immensely. Big congrats on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Thanks a lot as well for your acknowledgment of my poem Kuting. More blessings & power to you always. Sorry for the late visit coz of my workload & eye problem. I'll be back as soon as I can to read more from you & others here ok. God bless u always & your poetry. All the best always. Hugs
Brul Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:41 PM
Thank you kabayan. Your support delights my heart. ^___^
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 10:52 AM
Back with congrats. I just knew this could win!
Brul Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:40 PM
Thank you dear Andie. Your feedback means a lot. Stay sweet ^___^
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:55 PM
This is very good. You must enter it in a contest of Brian's
Smith  Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 1:33 AM
I could feel the painting coming to life. Well done
Brul Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:40 PM
Thank you Allison. ^___^
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