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Oh,That Sensous Spring Night

11/1/2023 When you tore my nubile nightgown, from my youthful body in two. That sherbet-colored beauty,which I had purchased, just for you! Forgotten, quickly then, though never your footsteps, in the sweet,hallways of time! Decades later, memories of that soccer Austrian goalie and I now live eternal in rhyme Your dimpled chin and sweet kisses, are but yesterday’s treasure, indeed, sublime. That starlit, spring night, so uniquely floral, Opalescent and with fireflies~ divine.!

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Date: 11/21/2023 5:52:00 AM
Pangie Pangie. Good Morning. Hi. This is beautiful in every way with wll poetic elements attached including the expressions and emotive factor. Truly. Be proud of your execution. Read back your entry and you will see. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a beautiful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. a (smile)
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Date: 11/21/2023 9:19:00 AM
Hi Lisa, thank you so much for your beautiful and warm words…. It was a spectacular right I think because I was with a spectacular man and a spectacular relationship., I was holding back writing about it, but it lives on my mind like I’ve been swimming in the gardenia pool. And I can be a little bit of memory again and again, and again, thank you Panagiota xxx x
Date: 11/3/2023 3:31:00 PM
Dear Pangie - a very romantic, sensual write from you my lovely. You have captured past memories so well as you reminisce - love the title! That last stanza, in particular, is beautifully and poetically written. ‘That starlit, spring night , so uniquely floral’ - gorgeous! So enjoyed it my lovely, sweet friend. Wishing you a happy weekend. Hugs and smiles :):)
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Date: 11/3/2023 3:41:00 PM
Greetings sweet one. Yes, this is still a vivid memory, that vibrates in my brain. It’s odd how after 85 years that memory is a blockbuster. It was a fun write.I, too like those lines. I hope your weekend is divine.. bungee today is my daughter’s 21st wedding anniversary. I can’t believe it..
Date: 11/2/2023 3:49:00 PM
a lovely and romantic poem, Pangie. I appreciate you sharing cherished memories. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/2/2023 4:25:00 PM
Hi..I had almost no sleep last night zombie today It’s hard to do anythingHope I won’t be a zombie tomorrow.))) Pangie
Date: 11/2/2023 12:40:00 PM
A very romantic and artfully penned poem of a blissful memory, Pangie. Hugs xx
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Date: 11/2/2023 12:49:00 PM
I do agree with your assessment. Reality and poetry mixed are my favs. Pangie

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